> Hello:
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> Is "does" providing more accent/emphasis? What else?
It suggests that the storyteller is both amused and slightly put out by her
bossiness, which is so self-centred that she isn't interested in what his
real name might be. (Not knowing the book, I can only guess that she has
given him a nickname and always uses that.)
The present tense (where one might instead have had "she has never has
asked") suggests that she always behaves in this way, almost as if they are
always meeting for the first time.
Alan Jones
Gary Vellenzer - 10 Jan 2004 12:05 GMT
> > Hello:
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> asked") suggests that she always behaves in this way, almost as if they are
> always meeting for the first time.
Aditional notes:
I would have expected "take-charge princess that she is...". To me, that
is the canonical form of this expression.
The author could have said "...B A never asks my name". That would be
plain statement that she has never asked and never will ask. In
speaking, the plain statement can be decorated with emphasis on the
never ("it bothers me that she has never done this even once"), or on
the asks ("she just decides on her own what to call me, without
consulting me"), or on both. The form with "does" is also emphatic, "she
really should ask me".
Gary
Marius Hancu - 10 Jan 2004 13:19 GMT
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> I would have expected "take-charge princess that she is...". To me, that
> is the canonical form of this expression.
Well the POV is not the author's (Palahniuk), but that of the girl
telling the story. It might be that Palahniuk wants to suggest her
limited grasp of the grammar.
> The author could have said "...B A never asks my name". That would be
> plain statement that she has never asked and never will ask. In
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> consulting me"), or on both. The form with "does" is also emphatic, "she
> really should ask me".
I love discussions of these verbal stresses, thus thank you.
Marius Hancu
Marius Hancu - 10 Jan 2004 13:13 GMT
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> > Take-charge princess who she is, Brandy Alexander never DOES ask my
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> real name might be. (Not knowing the book, I can only guess that she has
> given him a nickname and always uses that.)
On Brandy Alexander being self-centered: right you are, she's an
aspiring "supermodel":-), one gone bad ...
On her not using the right name for the girl (it's a she, in effect),
she consciously avoids any connection with girl's past, including her
name, for reasons which I would not present here, as I do not want to
spoil the book to anyone.
> The present tense (where one might instead have had "she has never has
> asked") suggests that she always behaves in this way, almost as if they are
> always meeting for the first time.
Thanks you.
Marius Hancu
> Hello:
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> Thanks.
> Marius Hancu
Yes, "does" provides more accent/emphasis. Emotion, really -- in this
sentence, I read frustration or irritation.
The sentence should begin "Take-charge princess as she is."
Cece
meirman - 12 Jan 2004 04:18 GMT
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ceceliaarmstrong@yahoo.com (Cece) posted:
>> Hello:
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>The sentence should begin "Take-charge princess as she is."
In the US I think it would be "Take-charge princess that she is,...",
(I don't know why) but since she's a human, a case could be made for
'who'.
>Cece
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In alt.english.usage on Fri, 09 Jan 2004 22:46:28 -0500 Marius Hancu
<DO_NOT_USE@videotron.ca> posted:
>Hello:
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>Is "does" providing more accent/emphasis? What else?
It implies he thought she would, or thought she should.
>Thanks.
>Marius Hancu
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