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Do California lawmakers actually know how to write proper English?

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Annu Pai - 27 Apr 2009 09:43 GMT
Topic: less vs fewer
Assumption: Less --> not countable; fewer --> countable
Example: Less crime; fewer police.

I was surprised this morning when I read the California ballot initiative
which stated "Potentially less ups and downs in state spending over time."

REF:
http://www.votesmart.org/election_ballot_measures_detail.php?ballot_id=1357

Assuming lawmakers are educated in proper English usage, I'm saddened they
could write "less ups and downs" in a well-reviewed legal document;
shouldn't they have written "fewer ups and downs" instead of less?

Or is my assumption of the proper use of less versus fewer incorrect?

Annu Pai
MC - 27 Apr 2009 11:23 GMT
> Topic: less vs fewer
> Assumption: Less --> not countable; fewer --> countable
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> Or is my assumption of the proper use of less versus fewer incorrect?

You're right.

Fewer eggs, less omelette.

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Alan Jones - 27 Apr 2009 13:33 GMT
>> Topic: less vs fewer
>> Assumption: Less --> not countable; fewer --> countable
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>
> Fewer eggs, less omelette.

Perhaps "ups and downs" is to be seen as a single compound equivalent to
"variation", making "less" appropriate.

Alan Jones
mm - 01 May 2009 04:27 GMT
>> You're right.
>>
>> Fewer eggs, less omelette.
>
>Perhaps "ups and downs" is to be seen as a single compound equivalent to
>"variation", making "less" appropriate.

I believe Ups and Downs is a racetrack in England.

>Alan Jones

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Glenn Knickerbocker - 27 Apr 2009 13:43 GMT
>shouldn't they have written "fewer ups and downs" instead of less?

Do you really think they mean that spending will change fewer times?  I
can't imagine it would ever stay exactly the same from one year to the
next.  Clearly what matters is the magnitude, not the frequency, of the
variation:  the ups and downs will be smaller.

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Athel Cornish-Bowden - 27 Apr 2009 17:44 GMT
> Topic: less vs fewer
> Assumption: Less --> not countable; fewer --> countable
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> Or is my assumption of the proper use of less versus fewer incorrect?

This "error" has been around for a very very long time:

K. ÆLFRED Boeth. xxxv. §5 [6] Swa mid læs worda swa mid ma, swæðer we
hit ȝereccan maȝon.  ("whether we may prove it with less words or with
more")

Since King Alfred's time I don't think there has ever been a time when
one couldn't use "less"' to mean fewer.

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David Kaye - 27 Apr 2009 20:44 GMT
> K. ÆLFRED Boeth. xxxv. §5 [6] Swa mid læs worda swa mid ma, swæðer we
> hit ȝereccan maȝon.  ("whether we may prove it with less words or with
> more")

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Odysseus - 28 Apr 2009 03:53 GMT
> Topic: less vs fewer
> Assumption: Less --> not countable; fewer --> countable
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> could write "less ups and downs" in a well-reviewed legal document;
> shouldn't they have written "fewer ups and downs" instead of less?

Or "less up-and-down", if they're trying to avoid technical-sounding
terms like "oscillation". Indeed, if they're aiming at a colloquial
style, they might have considered "fewer" to be excessively formal.

Regarding Glenn's point, if they didn't actually mean the number or
frequency of changes in spending, referring rather to the amplitude of
the variation, I'd expect "smaller ups and downs".

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