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lcy - 01 Jul 2009 13:56 GMT
Dear all,
    I have some questions regarding grammar.  Please help me.  Thank
you very much!

1.  These same states were the only parts of the U.S. ______ murder
rates were considerably below the national average.

   The  answer is "whose".   I wonder if "where" is ok here.   I
guess if "where" is not ok here,  the reason might be that there is no
"the" in front of "murder rates" so that it is not specific and clear
enough.  What do you think?

2.  Many students have poor time-management skills and often try to do
too much ____ too little time.

     The answer is " within".  I am wondering if "in" is ok here.   I
cannot find any reason why it doesn't fit here.

3.  Pepe's restaurant where we often eat has an excellent buffet.

    This is a correction question.  The word " where" here is not
correct.  But I cannot find why.

4.    Make a sentence that starts with "Not once".   The words "Nor
once"  have to be the first two words in the sentence. I really
couldn't come up with any sentence.
Do you have any idea?

Thank you very much!
John O'Flaherty - 01 Jul 2009 14:14 GMT
>Dear all,
>     I have some questions regarding grammar.  Please help me.  Thank
[quoted text clipped - 7 lines]
>"the" in front of "murder rates" so that it is not specific and clear
>enough.  What do you think?

"where" is fine.

>2.  Many students have poor time-management skills and often try to do
>too much ____ too little time.
>
>      The answer is " within".  I am wondering if "in" is ok here.   I
>cannot find any reason why it doesn't fit here.

"in" is the better choice.

>3.  Pepe's restaurant where we often eat has an excellent buffet.
>
>     This is a correction question.  The word " where" here is not
>correct.  But I cannot find why.

"where" is alright, as long as "where we often eat" is set off with
commas. You could use "in which" in place of "where" (still with
commas), but it would sound clumsy.

>4.    Make a sentence that starts with "Not once".   The words "Nor
>once"  have to be the first two words in the sentence. I really
>couldn't come up with any sentence.
> Do you have any idea?

I assume the second version, "nor once", is a typo.

Not once have I seen an easier set of questions. (meaning "never")
Not once did she even acknowledge my presence.

Not once, but twice, has the building been struck by lightning.

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John Varela - 01 Jul 2009 18:09 GMT
> >3.  Pepe's restaurant where we often eat has an excellent buffet.
> >
[quoted text clipped - 4 lines]
> commas. You could use "in which" in place of "where" (still with
> commas), but it would sound clumsy.

"at which" would be OK, again with commas.

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aquachimp - 04 Jul 2009 18:02 GMT
> >Dear all,
> >     I have some questions regarding grammar.  Please help me.  Thank
[quoted text clipped - 41 lines]
> --
> John

(number 4) I wondered about the typo too. Nevertheless:

Johnny had trouble setting off this morning. He just couldn't get the
car into action. At first he couldn't even get into it. Then the
ignition wouldn't co-operate; Nor, once he got the engine going, could
he get the gears to respond. So he took the bus.
High Priest - 06 Jul 2009 10:37 GMT
In article
<668c8c9a-89ac-4515-a918-a1bf249feca1@r33g2000yqn.googlegroups.com>,
aquachimp <aquachimp@aquachimp.freeserve.co.uk> responded to

> On Jul 1, 3:14 pm, John O'Flaherty <quias...@yeeha.com>

John, i agree with everything AquaChimp posted.
James Hogg - 01 Jul 2009 14:21 GMT
Quoth lcy <lcyiu3226@yahoo.com>, and I quote:

>Dear all,
>     I have some questions regarding grammar.  Please help me.  Thank
[quoted text clipped - 23 lines]
>couldn't come up with any sentence.
> Do you have any idea?

You've already been given good answers by John. Here's another
answer to question 4 that is perfectly correct English, although
your teacher may not like it:

Q: How many times have you been late for work?
A: Not once.

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HVS - 01 Jul 2009 14:22 GMT
On 01 Jul 2009, James Hogg wrote
> Quoth lcy <lcyiu3226@yahoo.com>, and I quote:
>> Dear all,
>> I have some questions regarding grammar.  Please help me.
>> Thank you very much!

-snip-

>> 4.    Make a sentence that starts with "Not once".   The words
>> "Nor once"  have to be the first two words in the sentence. I
[quoted text clipped - 7 lines]
> Q: How many times have you been late for work?
> A: Not once.

Ah; at least twice, then?

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Kalmia - 01 Jul 2009 18:42 GMT
> On 01 Jul 2009, James Hogg wrote
>
[quoted text clipped - 18 lines]
>
> Ah; at least twice, then?

What - never?
Well, hardly ever. (What IS that from - HMS Pinafore?)
HVS - 01 Jul 2009 21:14 GMT
On 01 Jul 2009, Kalmia wrote
>> On 01 Jul 2009, James Hogg wrote

>>> Q: How many times have you been late for work?
>>> A: Not once.
[quoted text clipped - 3 lines]
> What - never?
> Well, hardly ever. (What IS that from - HMS Pinafore?)

Yup.

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John Varela - 02 Jul 2009 23:55 GMT
> On 01 Jul 2009, Kalmia wrote
> >> On 01 Jul 2009, James Hogg wrote
[quoted text clipped - 8 lines]
>
> Yup.

And reprised in Utopia Limited.

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Pat Durkin - 01 Jul 2009 15:31 GMT
> Dear all,
>     I have some questions regarding grammar.  Please help me.  Thank
[quoted text clipped - 7 lines]
> "the" in front of "murder rates" so that it is not specific and clear
> enough.  What do you think?

Another option:  "in which".   The sentence without "the" is just fine,
whether you say "where, whose, or in which".

> 2.  Many students have poor time-management skills and often try to do
> too much ____ too little time.
>
>      The answer is " within".  I am wondering if "in" is ok here.   I
> cannot find any reason why it doesn't fit here.

Either is fine, but I would be more likely to use "in", saving "within"
for occasions in which the limits of time are stated (within 2 hours,
within 2 hours' time).  But in my examples, "in" is still OK ,

> 3.  Pepe's restaurant where we often eat has an excellent buffet.
>
>     This is a correction question.  The word " where" here is not
> correct.  But I cannot find why.

I agree with John in this.  Commas would set off the clause "where we
often eat".  If the sentence had begun "The* Pepe's restaurant where we
often eat...",  no comma would be required. Unlike John, I would find no
problem with "in which", but I agree that commas would be needed.

*The implication is that "Pepe's" is a chain of restaurants, like our
"Pedro's".

> 4.    Make a sentence that starts with "Not once".   The words "Nor
> once"  have to be the first two words in the sentence. I really
> couldn't come up with any sentence.
> Do you have any idea?

John's suggestions are very good.
Mark Brader - 01 Jul 2009 17:15 GMT
L.C. Yiu:
> 1.  These same states were the only parts of the U.S. ______ murder
> rates were considerably below the national average.
>
> The  answer is "whose".   I wonder if "where" is ok here.

Yes, but the meaning is different.  With "whose", it is talking about
the murder rate for each state, because "whose" is a possessive
referring to the state.  With "where", the plural "murder rates" is
being associated with each state.  This could be correct if we were
talking about murder rates for smaller areas within the states, like
cities or counties.  With the first meaning, as you suggest, "where
the murder rate" would be more likely than "where murder rates".

> 2.  Many students have poor time-management skills and often try to do
> too much ____ too little time.
>
> The answer is " within".  I am wondering if "in" is ok here.

Yes.  I'd use "in".

> 3.  Pepe's restaurant where we often eat has an excellent buffet.
>
> This is a correction question.  The word " where" here is not
> correct.  But I cannot find why.

"Where" is correct, but something else is wrong.  If "Pepe's" is meant
to refer to a specific restaurant, the clause "where we often eat" is
non-restrictive and should have a comma before and after.  If Pepe's
is a chain and the clause "where we often eat" is intended to specify
which one of the chain we're talking about, then "The" is required
before "Pepe's".

> 4.    Make a sentence that starts with "Not once".   The words "Nor
> once"  have to be the first two words in the sentence. I really
> couldn't come up with any sentence.
>  Do you have any idea?

Well, I certainly cannot construct a sentence starting with "Not" whose
first word is "Nor".
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Rich Ulrich - 01 Jul 2009 22:02 GMT
>L.C. Yiu:
>> 1.  These same states were the only parts of the U.S. ______ murder
[quoted text clipped - 9 lines]
>cities or counties.  With the first meaning, as you suggest, "where
>the murder rate" would be more likely than "where murder rates".

I think I agree with this analysis, as much as I can follow it.

What helps confuse me, I believe, is the choice of
"parts of the U.S."  as a reference to the states.
In fact, for "parts", I  expect an author to be talking about
regions, or else about specific cities.

If these states where "the only ones..." , then "whose"
follows pretty naturally.  And saying "where ... rates"  without
saying "the ...  rate"  seems to raise a big ambiguity
about smaller areas.

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Glenn Knickerbocker - 02 Jul 2009 17:20 GMT
> referring to the state.  With "where", the plural "murder rates" is
> being associated with each state.  This could be correct if we were
> talking about murder rates for smaller areas within the states,

--or at several different times in each state.

> > 3.  Pepe's restaurant where we often eat has an excellent buffet.
> "Where" is correct, but something else is wrong.  If "Pepe's" is meant
[quoted text clipped - 3 lines]
> which one of the chain we're talking about, then "The" is required
> before "Pepe's".

If Pepe is a man who owns several restaurants (and they're not named
Pepe's), the sentence may be correct as it is.

Well, nearly correct.  In all three cases, the word order suggests that
we might often go to other restaurants to do something besides eat. I'd
move "often" to the end of the clause to give it the proper emphasis.

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Athel Cornish-Bowden - 01 Jul 2009 19:01 GMT
> Dear all,
>      I have some questions regarding grammar.  Please help me.  Thank
> you very much!

Others have given perfectly satisfactory answers to your questions, so
I won't repeat them, but ...

> 1.  These same states were the only parts of the U.S. ______ murder
> rates were considerably below the national average.
>
>     The  answer is "whose".

"whose" is quite acceptable to me, but not to everyone. Some will say
that it can only refer to people.

> I wonder if "where" is ok here.   I
> guess if "where" is not ok here,  the reason might be that there is no
> "the" in front of "murder rates" so that it is not specific and clear
> enough.  What do you think?

If I were writing the sentence, I wouldn't use either "where", "whose"
or "in which", but "with", which allows shortening and simplification:
"These same states were the only parts of the U.S.  with
murderconsiderably below the national average.

> 2.  Many students have poor time-management skills and often try to do
> too much ____ too little time.
>
>       The answer is " within".

That is a bad answer. It's acceptable, but "in" is much better.

> I am wondering if "in" is ok here.   I
> cannot find any reason why it doesn't fit here.
[quoted text clipped - 3 lines]
>      This is a correction question.  The word " where" here is not
> correct.  But I cannot find why.

I agree with other answers:you need some commas.

> 4.    Make a sentence that starts with "Not once".   The words "Nor
> once"  have to be the first two words in the sentence. I really
> couldn't come up with any sentence.
>  Do you have any idea?

Where do get these answers from? I have the feeling that you have a
better sense of English than you authority.

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pimpom - 01 Jul 2009 20:33 GMT
>> Dear all,
>>      I have some questions regarding grammar.  Please help me.
[quoted text clipped - 3 lines]
> Others have given perfectly satisfactory answers to your
> questions, so I won't repeat them, but ...

.....<snip>.........

> Where do get these answers from?

I've been wondering about that too.

> I have the feeling that you have a better sense of English than
> you authority.

Same here. Though, as a non-native user, I couldn't have said it
with complete confidence.
 
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