> Two of you have been very helpful. Thank you, both.
>
> Is the first line correct?
>> Two of you have been very helpful. Thank you, both.
>>
>> Is the first line correct?
>
>I only see one line.
Oops. It started out longer.
>Assuming you mean the first sentence, yes -- but
That cerainly makes snese, but I meant the second sentence, which
originally was on the second line. I must be sleepy.
>(absent context) it implies that "you" comprises more than two people,
>the rest of them less helpful than those addressed in the second
>sentence. If "you" is intended to comprise only the two helpful
>individuals, the definite article is needed: "The two of you ...."
Thanks.

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John Varela - 20 Jul 2009 17:30 GMT
> >> Two of you have been very helpful. Thank you, both.
> >>
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> That cerainly makes snese, but I meant the second sentence, which
> originally was on the second line. I must be sleepy.
If you're really asking about "Thank you, both," then my comment is
that the comma should be deleted and the sentence would be better as
"Thanks to both of you."

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mm - 21 Jul 2009 03:16 GMT
>> >> Two of you have been very helpful. Thank you, both.
>> >>
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>that the comma should be deleted and the sentence would be better as
>"Thanks to both of you."
People do say that. I'm sure of it. Isn't "both" short for "both of
you"? Wwhat if I were a reporter transcribing what someone had said?
Would there be a comman then?

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John Varela - 21 Jul 2009 22:50 GMT
> >> >> Two of you have been very helpful. Thank you, both.
> >> >>
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>
> People do say that. I'm sure of it.
I don't disagree with that. Nonetheless I think the version with
"to" is better.
> Isn't "both" short for "both of you"?
It could be "Thank you, both for the lunch and for the bribe money."
Context is all.
> Wwhat if I were a reporter transcribing what someone had said?
> Would there be a comman then?
Only if the speaker paused between words.

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