I was wondering if it was convenient for you for me to pick the item
up in person.
I was wondering if it were convenient for you for me to pick the item
up in person.
Normally, I would use "were" after if. I'm not sure here.

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Peter Duncanson (BrE) - 29 Jan 2010 18:57 GMT
>I was wondering if it was convenient for you for me to pick the item
>up in person.
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>
>Normally, I would use "were" after if. I'm not sure here.
You could use "would be" instead of "were" or "was".
I was wondering if it would be convenient for you for me to pick the
item up in person.

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Bill McCray - 29 Jan 2010 19:15 GMT
> I was wondering if it was convenient for you for me to pick the item
> up in person.
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>
> Normally, I would use "were" after if. I'm not sure here.
"Were" is the subjunctive and indicates either a wish or a statement
contrary to fact, for example, "If I were king". Use "was" in your
sentence.
Bill in Kentucky
John Varela - 29 Jan 2010 22:03 GMT
> > I was wondering if it was convenient for you for me to pick the item
> > up in person.
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> contrary to fact, for example, "If I were king". Use "was" in your
> sentence.
The subjunctive also expreses uncertainty, which applies here,
unless the "if it was/were" is only there for courtesy, it being
nearly certain that the other person will in fact find it
convenient, as for example in order to complete a sale.

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Eric Walker - 29 Jan 2010 21:12 GMT
> I was wondering if it was convenient for you for me to pick the item up
> in person.
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>
> Normally, I would use "were" after if. I'm not sure here.
The sentence is an example of the "optative" subjunctive, which
represents the utterance as something desired or planned. Remember that
in the subjunctive mood, tenses do not have the simple temporal meanings
that they do in the indicative.
The idiomatic form would use auxiliaries to express the mode:
I was wondering if it would be convenient for you for me to pick the
item up in person.
The past-tense form suggests modest expression of desire. (Compare "I
wish you would stay a little longer.")

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mm - 31 Jan 2010 00:48 GMT
>> I was wondering if it was convenient for you for me to pick the item up
>> in person.
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>The past-tense form suggests modest expression of desire. (Compare "I
>wish you would stay a little longer.")
Isn't the subjunctive present progressive, "I wish you be staying a
little longer."?

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Eric Walker - 31 Jan 2010 01:22 GMT
[...]
> Isn't the subjunctive present progressive, "I wish you be staying a
> little longer."?
No. I suppose it would be "I wish you would be staying a little longer."

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CDB - 30 Jan 2010 02:02 GMT
> I was wondering if it was convenient for you for me to pick the item
> up in person.
[quoted text clipped - 3 lines]
>
> Normally, I would use "were" after if. I'm not sure here.
It looks to me like simple indirect speech. What you were saying to
yourself is "Is it convenient ...?". I am wondering if it is
convenient; I was wondering if it was convenient. Peter's "if it
would be convenient" is still accounted for by indirect speech: this
time, you were asking yourself "will it be convenient".
I agree with Eric that it's an example of the polite use of the past
tense, but that's the past tense of "be wondering": the past form
"was" is just sequence-of-tenses stuff.