Discussion Groups / English Usage / November 2006

I can only assume that the Material
I posted in another ng contained many english
and grammarical errors, because, the messages were
removed.

Anyhow, below is about 5% of the stuff

can someone please offer direct critical opinion
and analysis , thank you for your consideration.

BEGIN:

Roses @@@ With WATTS ***

You always knew I was no flame

Women smell what men cannot

(even gays dont know this)

  Say if a signal'r in mating call

    sends his spirit's spiciest scents signified by  a Total Meant
Message
 Best Airs, ooo scares, finest words, chit chatter

they'd rather sniff the old foul crotch of a Superior

smack!  and thus by being lesson'd,

submit    = )

                               The Tombing of The Shrewds LoL

       CADillac  coy and demure

BMW    black magic woman            Work Hurts   Men cry too bitches

    That's Amore

Ah, Oxygen OceanS

no doubt

just a girl

underneath it all        Now, who oppresses women?

fear of abandonment

Oofah, The Scent of a Woman!

THE GREATEST MYSTERY

Pain is the Whale of all Wonders

I shall never attain the meaning for its existence

Because of this, My heart is a house of horror

Be it in
The Eternal or in
The Present

Or Both

Its the Very Haunt of the Crisis

Which is why I believe life is not a game

and people are not toys

Which is why I love Victims above all things which are particular

In Nature and which correspond to our mortality as Beings of flesh

and the living breathe of life of mind of spirit and ultimately of

death

The Grand HereAfter

Is Not My Mess

(THERE,THERE)

this heart explains re ality easily

as for biology, eh, a broken field already

irreducible complexity killed that realm

not to mention the  dissymmetrical

pattern of behaviours between the sexes

I speak of course, of the secret world

the one that cells cannot  dispells

THE DEFINITION OF EVIL

That which harms without case

purposefully, willingly, knowingly

Goodness cannot tolerate its presence

THE HIGHEST PRINCIPLE

Do not inflict pain upon others

without good cause or good reason

Withdraw Feeling

   Hurts Less

       Error

          Err

           Hurt More Feelings

Evil is problem.

THE RIGHT WHY

There are many mysteries which I nor anyone

can explain

This leads me to believe in a Maker

Therefore, I fear and revere The Creator Unknown

At least to them which choose

of their own free will and accord

not to follow a path less taken

I care

WHAT IS TRUTH

Truth is what you truly believe in

The Truth,

Now that is not a personal tale

Deny

LAUGHTER IS A SIGN

Why laugh?

The mystery of laughter

will not make you laugh as much

or ponder as much or be confounded as much

as what the laughers in present time

hide within their cackles hidden hints

of why we once knew laughter genuinely

Of us on lower grounds

Our High Dieties, we know, have never laughed

But, once it stood in times past

peoples rejoiced and sometimes

there were good times

and cheer and laughter

But now, are cried out hearty tears

we laugh, of course, but, coarse

The laughs remained

But laughter didn't

THE PROBLEM OF PEACE

war is old

so why is all news about warfare only?

the good news is this

Goodness never stales

Since evil exists

it cannot sustain

itself on levels benign

where conflict must preceed condition

therefore peace is problematic

as evil does not see peace

as a state, although it is always stated as the goal,

but merely as an impossibility

proposed out of pragmatic inkling

for purposes of negotiating momentary threats perceived

thus suffering the situation

out of its reality

since power is a must

knowing peace needs power too

those in hope receive the misinterpretation

of the facts in question

Evil is problem

WHAT IS WAR

rage is vexation

porque la pelea real

ya no existe

War is the ultimate expression of love

of ownself

theory only plays a role but

not in everybody's moments

partly, because, there is

no universal fable

whats say you knew another story

and dared to love it more than hate

entonces el lugar ultimo

es otro libro de los otros

Oiden mueran en si mismos

Hate

A SOLDIER'S TAKE

To the fighter

the fight is always right

To the righteous

the right is always a fight

Men of might and tactic

and painted faced warriors

If this is a new principle for principality

then it can only be died by

Fight

EDITORIAL ON A NEW AROMA

Dudes lets keep our fingers crossed
for sake of dominoes, in larger effect,
and hope that this dynamite reaches
the Real Powers someday

<><~~~~~   It was , I believe and think as such,
Never meant to be smelt, only felt.

Touch Sheeba
Error, it seems,
Finds Calamity in Calmness

Or at least when wild and unpredictable oppurtunity
Allows for such a construct,
Of Consequences Under Ill-Commited Circumstances,
To exist in shifts continual
Amidst a Flux untimely
Of agents having all controllers
visibly known in their offices
of active administration

But, Forces Furious
Crash Our Situated Bunch
into interesting, yet, New,
Entanglements

Perhaps, confusion can temper
Where Peace fails to tame

IT Sucks Nuts Golden

If Only Eves Were Principals
Ah, If Only, Then We'd Know NoT
The Hurting Ache of Chaos

Eves Would  Present  Only

And in Seeing This
In Manifest
All Would Follow Without Order
And So Collapses All Disorder
Into Levels Maximum
Serene'd in Secret Peace
Yet not Defying Natural Law
All Together
For Who Can Deny True Beauty's Call?

Now and Now, as in currently,
Many might be, if asking , if asking
if asking
If The Situation Stinks
It Is Only Because
The Sniffers Sniff It

Else, We Can Cut The Snap
Of Tight Cheese Before
The Slice Lets Out Its Fumes
And Have an Aura Newly of the Old

But, Please!

Lets Not Perfume

The Prime Protagonist
With Dead And Withered
Planty Crudes

I Like My Odours Plain
And Not From Paris            There are weeds in the world

Yuck!

You are stallions for sheebatalions,
and as such

Horsed Battalions!

Every Bitch s' a Bomb

Carriers Be Cautious

Or Be Saddled in Explosions

Remember, their fuse lights itself!

Dain, Degress are tin
Careers, of professional ordainment,
are paths for folk of plenty
to serve the puppeteers, Primo Figures <~~~~~~I do not like the Tops

Leaving licensed lackeys fully tasked,
Choosing on to go ahead of themselves,
Dismissing Destination,
if love accounts at all
for any testimony of a life witnessed,
for a
full purse of something empty
And a bit of reputation
among their peers, who too, scrambling
for accolades
waste themselves on sweaty benches
seeking out attention from those already reputed

A heavy cycle without a scale
to wiegh the pro's and con's upon

So Pros are always con'd

Now about the Sheebas,

Since this is an editorial piece, pun intended,
I might be likely to believe someday,
That it represents itself for cases for Holy Matrimony ay
I might even someday be likely to think on such a possibility
CHEAT

@

There are weeds in the world

Some content is for their consumption only

Women always remember the early wound of life

The first cut of first love lost

It is  hidden impact

But, always present

My suggestion to men is, do not cheat