> Hi, My name is James I have a site
> http://love-dating-relationship.awardspace.info and after reading alot
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> cheers,
> James Handey
Terrible. Resubmit when you've learnt how to use apostrophes and
commas.
Will.
athel...@yahoo - 06 Nov 2006 12:22 GMT
> > Hi, My name is James I have a site
> > http://love-dating-relationship.awardspace.info and after reading alot
[quoted text clipped - 8 lines]
> Terrible. Resubmit when you've learnt how to use apostrophes and
> commas.
Learning that "a lot" is two words would be a useful next step when
he's reached proficiency with apostrophes and commas.
There are also some here also who must be very unhappy at seeing "that"
used with a human antecedent. In general I'm not too worried about
that, though in this particular instance it reads very oddly.
athel
Design Baboon - 06 Nov 2006 19:01 GMT
> > > Hi, My name is James I have a site
> > > http://love-dating-relationship.awardspace.info and after reading alot
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> used with a human antecedent. In general I'm not too worried about
> that, though in this particular instance it reads very oddly.
Personally I never use or feel comfortable with "that" with a human
antecedent, yet there are some who maintain that "who" (used
non-interrogatively) is only correct if it follows a comma. For example:
"The man that did that is sitting over there", but: "The man, who was now
wearing an angry expression, suddenly stood up and..."
Baboon.
Mike Lyle - 06 Nov 2006 20:30 GMT
[...]
> Personally I never use or feel comfortable with "that" with a human
> antecedent,
Sometimes it can actually be better: the AUE archive has plenty of
discussion about it.
> yet there are some who maintain that "who" (used
> non-interrogatively) is only correct if it follows a comma.[...]
Blimey! An outlandish notion. If you know their addresses, heave a
brick or two for me when you go round and smash their windows.

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Jeffrey Turner - 06 Nov 2006 22:54 GMT
>>Hi, My name is James I have a site
>>http://love-dating-relationship.awardspace.info and after reading alot
[quoted text clipped - 8 lines]
> Terrible. Resubmit when you've learnt how to use apostrophes and
> commas.
I can put questions in cant, as is my wont.
--Jeff

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"James Handey" <testicles.1.2@gmail.com> wrote in message
> ...after reading alot...
Alot isnot aword.
> Hi, My name is James I have a site
> http://love-dating-relationship.awardspace.info and after reading alot
[quoted text clipped - 5 lines]
> cheers,
> James Handey
Why would we care to look at your site, since you're obviously
illiterate?
Skitt - 06 Nov 2006 20:57 GMT
>> Hi, My name is James I have a site
>> http://love-dating-relationship.awardspace.info and after reading
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> Why would we care to look at your site, since you're obviously
> illiterate?
Maybe it's for people with Lowered Expectations.

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Robert Lieblich - 06 Nov 2006 23:43 GMT
> >> Hi, My name is James I have a site
> >> http://love-dating-relationship.awardspace.info and after reading
[quoted text clipped - 11 lines]
>
> Maybe it's for people with Lowered Expectations.
Or as Graeme Thomas more-or-less said, if all else fails one can
always serve as a bad example.

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Who has been known to do so
> Hi, My name is James I have a site
Use a period, not a comma.
> http://love-dating-relationship.awardspace.info and after reading alot
"a lot" (two words)
> of online info I came to put all the best of it together for my own
> reference, and have now put it online to share with others that are
"who", not "that": in modern English the trend is to use "who" with human
beings.
> interested or have some questions they cant or wont
"can't", "won't"
> talk to others about.
Try breaking the above sentence into two; it's too long.
> the address
Capitalize "The": the first word in a sentence must be capitalized.
> is http://love-dating-relationship.awardspace.info
Finish the above sentence with a period.
> I
> hope my information is helpful.
> cheers,
Capitalize "Cheers".
> James Handey
You're welcome.
Peter Moylan - 07 Nov 2006 11:42 GMT
>> Hi, My name is James I have a site
[snip]
>> James Handey
>
> You're welcome.
Of course you meant to write "Your welcome".
The lack of commentary on the error in the Subject line should serve as
a lesson to those who assume that we all read the Subject line. I
noticed the glaring error only by accident.
By the way, James (if you're still around), I'm not interested. Does
that mean that the site does not exist?

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Peacenik - 07 Nov 2006 16:13 GMT
>>> Hi, My name is James I have a site
>
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>
> Of course you meant to write "Your welcome".
Huh?
Skitt - 07 Nov 2006 17:20 GMT
>>>> Hi, My name is James I have a site
>>
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>
> Huh?
Read the rest of what Peter wrote (and you snipped).

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