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Sandy - 25 Nov 2006 15:23 GMT
Can anyone proofread what I've prepared for my microteaching? I'm in
need of correction, please.
Thank you in advance...

Hello, class. I hope you're all feeling well today. Today is a big
day. The first Microteaching Day.
Ok. Enough of greetings and, lets get it started. Ready? Alright.
First, make groups of four. Make it quick. And I'll give you
handouts. Please, pass them around. Everybody has got a copy? Anybody
who hasn't?

Ok. Last week, we learned about the "prominence", the most
highlighted, emphasized word in an utterance. To remind you what we
learned last class, I have a sound clip for you.
OK. Ready, I'll play the sound clip. (Play the clip....)

You've just heard different versions of a line from James bond
movies.
What was the line?
Yes, the name is Bond. James Bond
What did you notice? No body? OK. When Bond was first said, it was
stressed, and when it is repeated it wasn't stressed. Why?
Because.........the first Bond.......is... the new information, and the
second Bond......is......the old information. New information is likely
to be the most stressed, highlighted word in a sentence because.....it
is important.

Now, I'll give you a minute to play James Bond. Read the line
"I'm Bond. James Bond". If you have an English name, you can use
it to practice. Go ahead. If you don't have an English name, you can
pick whatever character or name you like. While you're doing it, pay
attention to the most stressed words having new information.

Alright.  Stop acting out. Enough of James Bond. I know you love acting
out, but we don't have enough time for a warm-up. Let's go on to
the next activity. First, look at the first page of the handout. I'm
going to play an audio clip for you to listen and repeat each sentence.
Remember: All the capitalized words in bold type should be spoken with
strong stress.
OK. I'm going to play the file.

Now, turn to the page 2. I'll give you a minute to make up 5
sentences and put them down on your worksheet. Each sentence has to
contain new and old information words.  You can circle the most
stressed word if you want. After that, ask and answer the questions in
pairs.

Ok. Are you finished? Good. Time is running up.
Then let's go on to our final activity, 'spot the difference." At
the last page, you can see a picture. However, your picture is slightly
different with your partner's. Try to find as many differences as
possible, and you have to exchange information by explaining what you
see and ask some questions. Remember; Do not show your picture to your
partner.

Alright. Time is up. Have a good day. Thank you..

Best regards,
Sandy.
Troy Steadman - 25 Nov 2006 16:14 GMT
This is excellent English and there isn't much to correct.

> Can anyone proofread what I've prepared for my microteaching? I'm in
> need of correction, please.
[quoted text clipped - 3 lines]
> day. The first Microteaching Day.
> Ok. Enough of greetings and, lets get it started. Ready? Alright.

...Ok, enough of the greetings...

> First, make groups of four. Make it quick. And I'll give you
> handouts. Please, pass them around. Everybody has got a copy? Anybody
[quoted text clipped - 10 lines]
> Yes, the name is Bond. James Bond
> What did you notice? No body? OK. When Bond was first said, it was

...when "Bond" was first said...[to hint that you are introducing new
information as a word rather than an object].

> stressed, and when it is repeated it wasn't stressed. Why?
> Because.........the first Bond.......is... the new information, and the
> second Bond......is......the old information. New information is likely
> to be the most stressed, highlighted word in a sentence because.....it
> is important.

This is excellent.

> Now, I'll give you a minute to play James Bond. Read the line
> "I'm Bond. James Bond". If you have an English name, you can use
[quoted text clipped - 18 lines]
> Ok. Are you finished? Good. Time is running up.
> Then let's go on to our final activity, 'spot the difference."

our final activity: "spot the difference".

> At
> the last page, you can see a picture. However, your picture is slightly
> different with

No. You can have "different than" or "different to", but "different
from" is best.

> your partner's. Try to find as many differences as
> possible, and you have to exchange information by explaining what you
[quoted text clipped - 5 lines]
> Best regards,
> Sandy.
Don Phillipson - 25 Nov 2006 17:35 GMT
> Can anyone proofread what I've prepared for my microteaching? I'm in
> need of correction, please. . . .
> Hello, class. I hope you're all feeling well today. Today is a big
> day. The first Microteaching Day. . . .

The English needs no correction.  But this is
colloquial English, and (unless required by your
teaching supervisor) you should not write a sort
of play script, including repetitions and non-
functional interjections required for effect.

You might well say exactly this to your class,
but you could never simply read this script.
It is much more important to see (and adapt
to) how the class responds to what you say (with
interest or indifference.)  If you need written aids
in class, one key word for each paragraph ought
to be enough.   Your eyes should be  on the class,
not on your script.

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Don Phillipson
Carlsbad Springs
(Ottawa, Canada)

 
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