Discussion Groups / English Usage / November 2006

Hello,
I have to write a cover letter and as I'm not a native, I'd like to
know if they are any mistakes in it. And esp. I don't know if I should
write "I work in a primary school where I am an activity leader" or
"I'm working..."
Thanks a lot!

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to you to apply for the position of French assistant in
the United Kingdom.

I am currently studying for a 'licence' (the French equivalent of a
BA) in English language, civilisation and literature at the University
of XXX.

I work in a primary school where I am an activity leader. I help
children to use computers, Internet and software. But most importantly,
this first experience in the field of teaching was very rich for me
because it gave me the opportunity to acquire methods and skills which
will help me as an assistant: I will try to make a dynamic group and
share in my passion for French culture and language.

I feel very comfortable working and living abroad since I have spent
the last three summers in London. I have done many jobs there including
sales assistant and waiter. Those experiences showed me that I can
rapidly adapt in a new place. On a personal level, this year abroad
would be perfect to learn about the English language and culture which
will help me a lot for the continuation of my studies.

That is why I want to be an assistant in the UK. This experience is
really important to me and I am prepared to do my best. I hope you will
find my qualifications of interest and I look forward to hearing from
you.

Yours faithfully,