Discussion Groups / English Usage / January 2007

The English is acceptable; the meaning is clear.  What's
your question?

Do you want to use US or UK English?

"localise" is UK spelling, while "localize" is US spelling.

"store" is more common in the US, whereas "shop" is more common in the UK.

"localize" in the US.

Perhaps "to" rather than "and".

First of all, it should be "the visitor's" or "your visitor's".

The clause is a bit ambiguous, though.  I first read it as "provide
the product" and "provide shipping pricing in the visitor's home
currency", and I was going to suggest that it should probably say
"product description" unless the product was being provided by
download.  But then I realized that it made more sense to read it as
providing two types of pricing, both in the home currency.  As
written, it's not strictly wrong, but it might cause less confusion if
it were worded something like

   With our software you can localize your e-store and provide
   pricing information for products and shipping in the visitor's
   home currency.

or

   With our software you can localize your e-store and provide
   pricing information in the visitor's home currency for products
   and shipping.

If e-cart provides a list of currencies, those "set"s might better be
"select"s.