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fyfpoon@gmail.com - 12 Jan 2007 16:18 GMT
I had never had the experience of teaching English composition until I
was given this job of teaching English composition in an university
here in China.  Now I am teaching it 'my way'.  And my way is to teach
my students to re-write model essays in their own words.

In the beginning of my conducting this course, there was visibly quite
a bit of irritation amongst my students because most of them were not
able to express what they understood in their own words.  So they ended
up copying what they read.  But now things seem to be normalizing,
especially after learning to use more English dictionary to look up
what they don't know .

I would, however, like to get some views on how to teach English
composition better than what I have been doing.

Would appreciate any views,

TKS
Don Phillipson - 12 Jan 2007 16:53 GMT
> I would, however, like to get some views on how to teach English
> composition better than what I have been doing.

Do your students have a textbook that advises them
how to proceed at home (when you are not present)?
I used and recommend Hugh Robertson's The English
Essay (McGraw-Hill Ryerson 1993).  There is a companion
volume The Research Essay (3d edn. 1995:  but I preferred
the first edition.)

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fyfpoon@gmail.com - 13 Jan 2007 05:03 GMT
"Don Phillipson 写道:
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> > I would, however, like to get some views on how to teach English
> > composition better than what I have been doing.
>
> Do your students have a textbook that advises them
> how to proceed at home (when you are not present)?

No.  English teaching is still at its very primitive stage in China and
many of the 'experts' are indigenously grown.  Practically all the
textbooks they use in schools are written by these home grown experts
and these textbooks have been designed for the students to pass
national exams rather than to inspire them to learn English.  The one I
am using was written and complied by a local expert and contains a
collection of home-made essays.  It is specifically created for the
students to mimic what has been written for exams.  There are, however,
quite a few 'foreign' or non-Asian looking teachers in China who are
expected to make meaningful contribution to the English learning in
China.  Unfortunately, most of them are not teachers by trade and they
are here for the predominant reason that they cannot find anything
better to do back home.  You can go on to deduce the rest of the
mess...

> I used and recommend Hugh Robertson's The English
> Essay (McGraw-Hill Ryerson 1993).  There is a companion
> volume The Research Essay (3d edn. 1995:  but I preferred
> the first edition.)
Adrian Bailey - 12 Jan 2007 17:22 GMT
> I had never had the experience of teaching English composition until I
> was given this job of teaching English composition in an university
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> I would, however, like to get some views on how to teach English
> composition better than what I have been doing.

What you're doing is forcing them to use their own words, which is good, but
you need to move on from this to forcing them to use their own research,
logic and planning. In its simplest form, an essay plan is just:
Introduction: Explain the question and how you're going to answer it;
Body: Give a detailed answer to the question, usually excluding your own
opinion;
Conclusion: Summarise the key points, possibly giving your (reasoned)
opinion.

This matter is best explained to the students by getting them to analyse
some of the essays they've been rewriting. When I teach essay-writing I give
two marks: one for the English and one for the composition. I usually find
that most students fail their first assignment, but the bad marks encourage
them to do what they've been told!

Adrian
jerry_friedman@yahoo.com - 12 Jan 2007 22:29 GMT
> > I had never had the experience of teaching English composition until I
> > was given this job of teaching English composition in an university
[quoted text clipped - 10 lines]
> > I would, however, like to get some views on how to teach English
> > composition better than what I have been doing.

If you contribute to this group and ask for comments on your English,
people will help you improve it.  I've learned a lot here.

> What you're doing is forcing them to use their own words, which is good, but
> you need to move on from this to forcing them to use their own research,
> logic and planning.
...

This has an advantage additional to helping them learn research, logic,
and planning.  People learn better when they're doing things they're
interested in.  (I believe there are studies that show this, and anyway
it's obvious when you look at how we learn thousands of words without
trying but most students struggle to learn a few assigned "vocabulary"
words a week--the difference is whether we want to know the words.)  If
you let students pick their own topics, you might find that they learn
English composition better.  You have to do this within reason,
though--otherwise many of them will just write papers on celebrities
and get all their information from the Web.  One way is to stipulate
that you have to approve the topics; another is to give them a set of
topics to pick from.

Another approach to this is to let students write things other than
essays, if you're allowed to.  Students may put more energy into
writing the kinds of things they expect to write--personal letters,
letters to the editor, business communications, advertisements,
personal statements for graduate- or professional-school applications,
cover letters for job applications, etc.

I hope your students are spending some time rewriting their work in
view of what they've learned.

To amplify what Don Phillipson said, I believe there's been a great
deal written on teaching English composition.  You might have to adapt
it to teach Chinese students, though.  (You might even have to adapt
what I just said about individual topic choices--I've often heard that
Chinese culture is less individualistic than American.  Still, I'll bet
giving them some freedom will help.)  You can also ask experienced
colleagues what they do and ask to sit in on their classes to
observe--they'd probably find that flattering.

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fyfpoon@gmail.com - 13 Jan 2007 05:19 GMT
"jerry_friedman@yahoo.com 写道:

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> I hope your students are spending some time rewriting their work in
> view of what they've learned.

They are learning to rewrite the model essays they have been taught.  I
do, however, add a bit of substance to what has been covered in these
model essays.

> To amplify what Don Phillipson said, I believe there's been a great
> deal written on teaching English composition.  You might have to adapt
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> colleagues what they do and ask to sit in on their classes to
> observe--they'd probably find that flattering.

The local teachers gave up on these 'college students' long time ago.
One local teacher commented that to read what these students have to
write is like trying to crack a secret military code.  The school last
year did invite a few 'foreign teachers' to try.  Some of these
'foreign teachers' either refused and some ended up playing little
games and showing movies in the classes...and rounding the year off
with Santa Clause shows...
fyfpoon@gmail.com - 13 Jan 2007 05:07 GMT
"Adrian Bailey 写道:
"
> > I had never had the experience of teaching English composition until I
> > was given this job of teaching English composition in an university
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> This matter is best explained to the students by getting them to analyse
> some of the essays they've been rewriting.

I think your suggestion is well taken that students are encouraged to
express and share their views on a topic before proceeding to write.

Tks

When I teach essay-writing I give
> two marks: one for the English and one for the composition. I usually find
> that most students fail their first assignment, but the bad marks encourage
> them to do what they've been told!
>
> Adrian
 
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