Which one of these is proper English?
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peek^ - 29 Jan 2007 18:11 GMT Im building a site where I offer users to signup for a news letter. English is not my first language, so I need some advice which one of the bellow is right?
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Don Phillipson - 29 Jan 2007 18:23 GMT > Im building a site where I offer users to signup for a news letter. English > is not my first language, so I need some advice which one of the bellow is [quoted text clipped - 7 lines] > services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam free, and you can > unsubscribe at anytime. 1. Preposition: we do not sign up TO something, we sign up FOR something. 2. Word: English has no word ANYTIME. We use the phrases ANY TIME and AT ANY TIME indifferently.
But presenting a web page in perfect English can by itself create excessive expectations, if your English is in fact less than perfect. It may be prudent to leave your text as you first drafted it.
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peek^ - 29 Jan 2007 18:40 GMT > 1. Preposition: we do not sign up TO something, > we sign up FOR something. [quoted text clipped - 5 lines] > less than perfect. It may be prudent to leave your text as > you first drafted it. How's this?
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Tony Cooper - 29 Jan 2007 18:51 GMT >> 1. Preposition: we do not sign up TO something, >> we sign up FOR something. [quoted text clipped - 11 lines] >services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam free, and you can >unsubscribe at any time. While "news letter" is not incorrect, "newsletter" is the commonly used term.
We sign up "to receive" a newsletter, or we sign up "for" a newsletter.
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contrex - 29 Jan 2007 20:07 GMT > >> 1. Preposition: we do not sign up TO something, > >> we sign up FOR something. The phrase "sign up to", (as a variant of "sign up for") meaning "subscribe to" (physically or metaphorically) is not unknown, even if it is frowned upon by purists. "I'm not signing up to that", meaning "I'm not associating my name with those views" is quite common in the UK.
Skitt - 29 Jan 2007 20:37 GMT >> 1. Preposition: we do not sign up TO something, >> we sign up FOR something. [quoted text clipped - 11 lines] > products, services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam free, > and you can unsubscribe at any time. Does the newsletter (one word) provide only headlines? Is there no further information? That does not seem to be right.
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Maria - 29 Jan 2007 19:22 GMT Don Phillipson wrote, in part:
> 2. Word: English has no word ANYTIME. We use > the phrases ANY TIME and AT ANY TIME indifferently. Just for the record:
From Merriam-Webster Online (an American dictionary):
anytime One entry found for anytime.
Main Entry: any·time Pronunciation: 'e-nE-"tIm Function: adverb
: at any time whatever (That's the total entry.)
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Robert Lieblich - 29 Jan 2007 23:07 GMT > Don Phillipson wrote, in part: > [quoted text clipped - 14 lines] > > (That's the total entry.) Yabbut, if "anytime" equals "at any time whatever," then "at anytime" equals "at at any time whatever." That ain't right, Toots.
Or, if you prefer, the object of a preposition isn't an adverb.
But fear not -- you're on record.
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Maria - 30 Jan 2007 00:22 GMT >> Don Phillipson wrote, in part: >> [quoted text clipped - 12 lines] >> Function: adverb >> at any time whatever*
>> (That's the total entry.) *attribution [was >>>] corrected; my error originally. I have no idea how I did that.
> Yabbut, if "anytime" equals "at any time whatever," then "at anytime" > equals "at at any time whatever." That ain't right, Toots. > > Or, if you prefer, the object of a preposition isn't an adverb. But "at any time whatever" is the definition for "anytime," not for "at anytime." Plus, I would not say or write "at anytime"; I'd say or write "at any time."
> But fear not -- you're on record. Yes. Isn't Usenet marvelous?
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rzed - 29 Jan 2007 19:39 GMT >> Im building a site where I offer users to signup for a news >> letter. [quoted text clipped - 14 lines] > 2. Word: English has no word ANYTIME. We use > the phrases ANY TIME and AT ANY TIME indifferently. American English has had "anytime" since the late 1700's. The first definition in my Random House Webster's Unabridged Dictionary is "at any time; regardless of hour, date, etc.; whenever". So in Yankland, "at anytime" would not be correct, but "anytime" would be.
> But presenting a web page in perfect English can by > itself create excessive expectations, if your English is in fact > less than perfect. It may be prudent to leave your text as > you first drafted it. Prudent indeed.
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John Kane - 29 Jan 2007 21:47 GMT > Im building a site where I offer users to signup for a news letter. English > is not my first language, so I need some advice which one of the bellow is [quoted text clipped - 7 lines] > services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam free, and you can > unsubscribe at anytime. the latest headlines.
Peacenik - 30 Jan 2007 00:46 GMT > Im building a site where I offer users to signup for a news letter. English > is not my first language, so I need some advice which one of the bellow is [quoted text clipped - 7 lines] > services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam free, and you can > unsubscribe at anytime. "newsletter" is generally one word.
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John Doherty - 30 Jan 2007 04:08 GMT > Im building a site where I offer users to signup for a news letter. > English is not my first language, so I need some advice which one of > the bellow is right?
> Sign up to our news letter to receive latest headlines about new > products, services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam free, [quoted text clipped - 3 lines] > products, services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam free, > and you can unsubscribe at anytime. Neither is entirely satisfactory. Try this:
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Skitt - 30 Jan 2007 17:56 GMT >> Im building a site where I offer users to signup for a news letter. >> English is not my first language, so I need some advice which one of [quoted text clipped - 13 lines] > products, services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam free > and you can unsubscribe at any time. Yeah, but I would want more than just some headlines. I would also put the comma back after the "free".
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John Doherty - 31 Jan 2007 04:14 GMT >>> Im building a site where I offer users to signup for a news >>> letter. English is not my first language, so I need some advice >>> which one of the bellow is right?
>>> Sign up to our news letter to receive latest headlines about new >>> products, services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam >>> free, and you can unsubscribe anytime.
>>> Sign up to our news letter to receive latest headlines about new >>> products, services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam >>> free, and you can unsubscribe at anytime.
>> Neither is entirely satisfactory. Try this:
>> Sign up for our newsletter to receive the latest headlines about >> new products, services, software, and technology. We are 100% spam >> free and you can unsubscribe at any time.
> Yeah, but I would want more than just some headlines. Well, I wanted to get the easy stuff fixed up first.
> I would also put the comma back after the "free". OK. I can live with it either way.
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