Discussion Groups / English Usage / February 2007

"The total score of overall motivation factors is 42, the
score of the teachers¡¯ sense of achievement in their
teaching is 12, the score of challenge of the teaching work
itself is 7, the score of teachers¡¯ professional autonomy
is 9, the score of appreciation and identification is 9, and
the score of teachers¡¯ professional development is 5."

In the above paragraph, there are six items which don't need
to be corrected. I feel uncertain whether the sentence
structure "the score of item 1..is.., the score of item
2..is.., ..., the score of item 6..is.." is right. Any
advice or comment will be appreciated!

Item 1: overall motivation factors
Item 2: teachers¡¯ sense of achievement in their teaching
Item 3: challenge of the teaching work itself
Item 4: teachers¡¯ professional autonomy
Item 5: appreciation and identification
Item 6: teachers¡¯ professional development