Discussion Groups / English Usage / June 2007

here are two sentences,please advise,very thanks

there exists systematically large and remarkably large discrepancies
between the prediction obtained from global/local 3-shock theories and
the experiments of the regime of simple MR and vNR, as Ms and (or) QW
decrease towards unity and zero,respectively.

The most critically significant is the rapid, yet smooth,
increasingly
opposite trend of the variation between 3-shock predicted and measured
X's of weak MR.