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Do I need a comma here?

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datere - 31 Mar 2008 00:55 GMT
Some flowers, together with a love letter, were sent to her.
The principle, together with the teachers, is going to attend a
meeting.
You, like everybody elae, have 2 teet.

In the above sentences, will it be acceptable to leave out all the
commas?

Thank you for your answer!
Peter Moylan - 31 Mar 2008 02:58 GMT
> Some flowers, together with a love letter, were sent to her.
> The principle, together with the teachers, is going to attend a
          ^
          principal

> meeting.
> You, like everybody elae, have 2 teet.
                        ^           ^
                      else         teats

> In the above sentences, will it be acceptable to leave out all the
> commas?

No, I think you need these commas. Without the "together", it might be
possible to omit the commas. For example, you could write "Some flowers
and a love letter were sent to her." Phrasing this as a passive
sentence, by the way, gives the impression that you don't know (or would
prefer not to say) who sent them to her.

Your second example is a bit unnatural, in my opinion. I would write
"The principal and the teachers are going to attend a meeting." This
assumes that they are going to a meeting with some other people who are
not teachers. If they are going to be the only ones at the meeting, it
would be better to write "The principal is going to have a meeting with
the teachers."

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datere - 31 Mar 2008 04:36 GMT
Thank you for your answer!
Bob G - 31 Mar 2008 04:16 GMT
> Some flowers, together with a love letter, were sent to her.
> The principle, together with the teachers, is going to attend a
> meeting.
> You, like everybody elae, have 2 teet.

Some flowers were sent to her with a love letter.
The principal and the teachers are going to a meeting.
You have two feet, as does everyone else.
Maria C. - 31 Mar 2008 04:36 GMT
>> Some flowers, together with a love letter, were sent to her.
>> The principle, together with the teachers, is going to attend a
[quoted text clipped - 4 lines]
> The principal and the teachers are going to a meeting.
> You have two feet, as does everyone else.

IMO: The sentences "datere" wrote are fine except for the three
misspellings/typos: "principle" should be "principal" (remember "the
principal is your pal"); "elae" should be "else"; and "2 teet" should
probably be "two feet," though Peter did suggest "teats" for "teet."
(Who's to say?)

As for the commas, I'd say they're correct.

Oh, one more thought: Does "everyone else" have two feet? And what's
that line about the average number of legs?

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