Hello,
What is your strategy to eradicate "to be + adjective" phrases from
sentences? I would like to replace them with stronger verbs. Consider
these examples:
It is important to wash your hands.
It is nice that he brought flowers.
We think it is essential to carry water with you all the time.
Thanks.
Kasi
Don Phillipson - 12 Jan 2009 12:55 GMT
> What is your strategy to eradicate "to be + adjective" phrases from
> sentences? I would like to replace them with stronger verbs. Consider
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> It is nice that he brought flowers.
> We think it is essential to carry water with you all the time.
1. Usual practice is simply to rephrase (find different words for) the
idea.
This is common in English, is usually easy (because of the size and
flexibility oof the language) and requires no special "strategy."
2. If you want to formulate a special programme, it might be to
change the person in the source statement wherever possible:
e.g. your first specimen in the second person could be recast in
the first or third, your second in the third person could be
rephrased in the second, or else impersonally (as in no. 2).
E.g.
> We think it is essential to carry water with you all the time.
=
You ought to carry water all the time.

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Don Phillipson
Carlsbad Springs
(Ottawa, Canada)
jerry_friedman@yahoo.com - 13 Jan 2009 18:34 GMT
> Hello,
>
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>
> It is important to wash your hands.
You can say "Washing your hands is important". To have a stronger
verb, you might need to say what it's important for. "Washing your
hands helps keep you from getting sick," for instance.
> It is nice that he brought flowers.
This is a tough one. "Bringing flowers was nice" works in some
contexts.
> We think it is essential to carry water with you all the time.
I'm pretty much with Don Phillipson on this one, though you can retain
the "We think"--"We think you should carry water at all times."
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Jerry Friedman