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> I think it was a fine hat for the occasion -- though, I hasten to add, with
> the caveat that not just anyone can wear such a hat. Such a hat!
The person who wanted the hat in the Smithsonian was comparing it to
the hats that black women wear (or used to wear) to church on
Sunday, elaborate creations that competed with one another. He
sincerely felt--I'm sure he was black himself--that she was honoring
a cultural tradition with that hat.
ObAUE: What punctuation belongs after "Sunday" above? Comma,
semicolon, or colon? And should it be followed with "compete" or
"competed"? "Competed" is how it naturally flowed for me.

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Pat Durkin - 26 Jan 2009 19:10 GMT
>> I think it was a fine hat for the occasion -- though, I hasten to
>> add, with the caveat that not just anyone can wear such a hat. Such
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> semicolon, or colon? And should it be followed with "compete" or
> "competed"? "Competed" is how it naturally flowed for me.
I opt for the comma that you have, or else go for a dash.
I understood that semicolons had to be used to link independent clauses,
and at times are involved in phrases in a series when commas can get
confusing.
I reserve colons for lists that don't have comma links--bulleted or
numbered items, for example.
But by now you know that I am recalling lessons from more than 50 years
ago. Times may have changed. Indeed, if I find myself spending too
much trying to work out a style I vaguely remember, I close my eyes and
leap.
Skitt - 26 Jan 2009 19:40 GMT
>> I think it was a fine hat for the occasion -- though, I hasten to
>> add, with the caveat that not just anyone can wear such a hat. Such
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> ObAUE: What punctuation belongs after "Sunday" above? Comma,
> semicolon, or colon?
It'd be a dash, for me.
> And should it be followed with "compete" or
> "competed"? "Competed" is how it naturally flowed for me.
I'd have gone with "compete". Why? I don't know.

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Cece - 26 Jan 2009 20:34 GMT
> >> I think it was a fine hat for the occasion -- though, I hasten to
> >> add, with the caveat that not just anyone can wear such a hat. Such
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> --
> Skitt (AmE)
In many churches (of a particular denomination with a congregation of
a particular subgroup), wonderful hats are still worn. Without
registering, I can't get to the article about it in The Anniston Star
(May 5, 2008), but here is the bit of the article that Google shows in
the list of links: "The women had come to Haven to celebrate the
Sunday morning hats that make up a distinct part of the black
experience in America..." The "(or used to wear)" should have been
left out; the hats still compete with each other.
Pat Durkin - 26 Jan 2009 21:14 GMT
>>>> I think it was a fine hat for the occasion -- though, I hasten to
>>>> add, with the caveat that not just anyone can wear such a hat. Such
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> experience in America..." The "(or used to wear)" should have been
> left out; the hats still compete with each other.
I have a neighbor who walks like a queen. At 60 years of age, though
she has had both knees replaced, she has a majestic stride, and manages
3-inch heels the whole winter through. Anyway, she and her daughter are
participants in an African Methodist Episcopal congregation, and are now
trying to set up their own church. Mama has crocheted a number of
startling hats for herself that don't fall much short of being crowns.
Lovely. And she doesn't just wear them to church. Oh, no.
jerry_friedman@yahoo.com - 26 Jan 2009 21:32 GMT
> On Mon, 26 Jan 2009 04:07:58 UTC, Roland Hutchinson
>
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> sincerely felt--I'm sure he was black himself--that she was honoring
> a cultural tradition with that hat.
Here's a blog post adding a suggestion that the hat specifically
honored the one Mahalia Jackson wore when she sang at the March on
Washington in 1963 (scene of the "I have a dream speech"). So much
for my knowledge of American iconography.
http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1404953/will_aretha_franklins_inaugural
_hat.html
Here's Mahalia:
http://www.ipl.org/images/black_hist.jpg
The only similarity I see between the hats is the oversizedness, but
maybe that's enough for a fashion allusion.
> ObAUE: What punctuation belongs after "Sunday" above? Comma,
> semicolon, or colon?
My first choice would be a comma; second, a dash. I don't really like
either a semicolon or colon there.
> And should it be followed with "compete" or
> "competed"? "Competed" is how it naturally flowed for me.
Is "compete (or competed)" too pedantic?
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Jerry Friedman
Fran Kemmish - 26 Jan 2009 21:43 GMT
>> On Mon, 26 Jan 2009 04:07:58 UTC, Roland Hutchinson
>>
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> Washington in 1963 (scene of the "I have a dream speech"). So much
> for my knowledge of American iconography.
Interesting: I saw that the writer referred to the "I've got a dream"
speech, which I'd never seen before. I checked to see if the writer was
from England but he isn't (born in Canada, and raised in LA).
Fran
Roland Hutchinson - 27 Jan 2009 04:58 GMT
>> I think it was a fine hat for the occasion -- though, I hasten to add,
>> with
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> sincerely felt--I'm sure he was black himself--that she was honoring
> a cultural tradition with that hat.
I was also quite sure that she was doing just that -- well, not perhaps so
much _honoring_ the tradition per se as _participating_ in it: of course
one who wears a Sunday hat to church will also wear a Sunday hat to sing a
hymn for the President of the United States.
If the tradition is dying out, it's going to be a long time a-dying. Hats
have remained very much in evidence in every black congregation that I've
ever visited.
> ObAUE: What punctuation belongs after "Sunday" above? Comma,
> semicolon, or colon? And should it be followed with "compete" or
> "competed"? "Competed" is how it naturally flowed for me.
Comma (to set of the phrase that is an appositive to "hats").
I'd have to come down on the side of "competed", as you did, both because my
ear tells me so and because the rule tells me so: the disjunction counts
even though it's in parentheses, so the nearest verb ("used to wear")
determines the sequence of tenses.

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