> Hello to everyone,
>
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> it seems to me it is wrong because the second conditional is structured as
> follows: if + simple past-->would + infinitive. Am i right?
You're right. I don't know the numbers of the conditional forms, but
that sentence should be,
"If Einstein had not had any talent, then he would not have become as
famous as he was."
I'd probably write, "If Einstein hadn't had any talent, he wouldn't
have become famous."
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Jerry Friedman
Django Cat - 05 May 2009 20:44 GMT
> > Hello to everyone,
> >
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> "If Einstein had not had any talent, then he would not have become as
> famous as he was."
For the record that's a third conditional, used to speculate about how
things would be had something happened differently in the past -
sometimes called the impossible conditional because you can't ever
change the parameters. A speaker at a conference I went to a while
back described this structure (with her tongue firmly in cheek) as
'only of any use to sad and bitter 55 year olds'.
DC
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Ildhund - 05 May 2009 21:53 GMT
Jerry Friedman wrote...
>> i would like to ask whether the following sentence is correct or
>> not.
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> I'd probably write, "If Einstein hadn't had any talent, he
> wouldn't have become famous."
There is something fishy about the sentence ending in 'was', so I'm
not surprised that you'd skate round it. 'Become' implies
progression from one state to another, and in my ears 'was' refers
to the start of that progression, not its outcome. I reckon the
sentence should either read '... he would not have been as famous as
he was,' or '... he would not have become as famous as he did.'

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Noel
Robert Bannister - 06 May 2009 02:09 GMT
> Jerry Friedman wrote...
>
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> '... he would not have been as famous as he was,' or '... he would not
> have become as famous as he did.'
"Did" is my preference too.

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Rob Bannister
JimboCat - 05 May 2009 21:55 GMT
On May 5, 3:30 pm, jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote:
> > Hello to everyone,
>
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> "If Einstein had not had any talent, then he would not have become as
> famous as he was."
I don't like "was". It just doesn't match the conditional at all, to
my ear. I'd end the sentence with "did":
"If Einstein had not had any talent, then he would not have become as
famous as he did."
I could also bear with ending the sentence with "is" (which has
philosophical problems of its own, but sounds better than "was").
> I'd probably write, "If Einstein hadn't had any talent, he wouldn't
> have become famous."
Best of all.
Jim Deutch (JimboCat)
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"I had had feathers, but was not a real bird" - Karl Syring
> Hello to everyone,
>
[quoted text clipped - 5 lines]
> it seems to me it is wrong because the second conditional is structured as
> follows: if + simple past-->would + infinitive. Am i right?
It is wrong.
Correct would be "If Einstein had not had any talent, then ...".
Also correct, but slightly more archaic, would be "Had Einstein
not had any talent, then ...".
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> Hello to everyone,
>
> i would like to ask whether the following sentence is correct or not.
>
> "If Einstein did not have any talent then he would not have become as
> famous as he was."
I wouldn't think so.