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jerry_friedman@yahoo.com - 08 May 2009 18:54 GMT
Hi, DC.  A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or
revolting cliches) of academic writing.  Do you know /They Say I Say/,
by Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenster?  It seems to be an introduction
to writing about controversial topics, and it includes some dozens of
template sentences.  For instance, in the Index of Templates under
"Introducing Standard Views", the first entries are

* Americans today tend to believe that...

*Conventional wisdom has it that...

* Common sense seems to dictate that...

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Django Cat - 08 May 2009 20:53 GMT
> Hi, DC.  A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or
> revolting cliches) of academic writing.  Do you know /They Say I Say/,
[quoted text clipped - 8 lines]
>
> * Common sense seems to dictate that...

Oh, those are great!  Along with 'most people would agree that...'.
Thanks Jerry, I'll check it out.

DC
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Arcadian Rises - 08 May 2009 21:29 GMT
> jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote:
> > Hi, DC. �A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or
[quoted text clipped - 15 lines]
> DC
> --

I prefer the more scientific kind:

Research says...

All dentists agree that...

Statistics show...

or even more accurate:

According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is
the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases.
William - 08 May 2009 21:37 GMT
> > jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote:
> > > Hi, DC. A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or
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> According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is
> the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases.- Hide quoted text -

I rather like the advertorial

"I'm not a dentist, but studies show that...".

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stephanie.mitchell@telenet.be - 08 May 2009 22:33 GMT
> > > jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote:
> > > > Hi, DC. A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or
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>
>  "I'm not a dentist, but studies show that...".

That's 'but I play one on TV', shirley?
Jeffrey Turner - 09 May 2009 02:13 GMT
>> jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote:
>>> Hi, DC. �A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or
[quoted text clipped - 17 lines]
>
> All dentists agree that...

Not _all_ dentists, four out of five dentists.

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Evan Kirshenbaum - 09 May 2009 05:32 GMT
>> All dentists agree that...
>
> Not _all_ dentists, four out of five dentists.

Not even that.  "Four out of five dentists surveyed".

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Peter Duncanson (BrE) - 09 May 2009 13:50 GMT
>>> All dentists agree that...
>>
>> Not _all_ dentists, four out of five dentists.
>
>Not even that.  "Four out of five dentists surveyed".

Then this this one "Colgate Total Professional Weekly Clean...clinically
tested by dentists".

Good, but what were the results of the clinical tests?

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franzi - 09 May 2009 20:45 GMT
On May 9, 1:50 pm, "Peter Duncanson (BrE)" <m...@peterduncanson.net>
wrote:
> On Fri, 08 May 2009 21:32:00 -0700, Evan Kirshenbaum
>
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>
> Good, but what were the results of the clinical tests?

Nine out of ten beds tested caused backache in dental nurses.

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Skitt - 09 May 2009 20:49 GMT
>>>>> All dentists agree that...
>>>>
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>
> Nine out of ten beds tested caused backache in dental nurses.

Have the dental nurses considered a change of position?
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Peter Duncanson (BrE) - 09 May 2009 21:08 GMT
>>>>>> All dentists agree that...
>>>>>
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>
>Have the dental nurses considered a change of position?

Well, let's see. They should be familiar with terms like uppper and
lower, labial and lingual.

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R H Draney - 09 May 2009 22:29 GMT
BrE filted:

>>>>>>> All dentists agree that...
>>>>>>
[quoted text clipped - 10 lines]
>>
>>Have the dental nurses considered a change of position?

ObPunchline: make up your mind so I'll know how to adjust the chair....

>Well, let's see. They should be familiar with terms like uppper and
>lower, labial and lingual.

I've heard them use "labial", but its opposite seems to be "buccal" (with
"distal" and "mesial" marking an orthogonal direction)....r

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Evan Kirshenbaum - 09 May 2009 23:35 GMT
> BrE filted:
>>
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> I've heard them use "labial", but its opposite seems to be "buccal"
> (with "distal" and "mesial" marking an orthogonal direction)....r

Mine contrasts "buccal" with "lingual".  "Labial" should be the same
as "buccal", referring to the lip rather than the cheek.  

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R H Draney - 10 May 2009 05:24 GMT
Evan Kirshenbaum filted:

>> BrE filted:
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>Mine contrasts "buccal" with "lingual".  "Labial" should be the same
>as "buccal", referring to the lip rather than the cheek.  

Sorry, yes, it was "lingual", not "labial"....

I've never gotten around to asking what the other two directions are
called..."occlusal", I suppose, and "gingival" (or maybe "radical")....r

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Evan Kirshenbaum - 10 May 2009 07:00 GMT
> Evan Kirshenbaum filted:
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> called..."occlusal", I suppose, and "gingival" (or maybe
> "radical")....r

"superior" and "inferior", I believe.

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R H Draney - 10 May 2009 09:39 GMT
Evan Kirshenbaum filted:

>> I've never gotten around to asking what the other two directions are
>> called..."occlusal", I suppose, and "gingival" (or maybe
>> "radical")....r
>
>"superior" and "inferior", I believe.

Wouldn't that require the functional associations to change when moving from the
upper jaw to the lower, and vice versa?...

(One hygienist made a point of reporting to the dentist something of interest
that she had found on my "cusp of Carabelli")....r

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Evan Kirshenbaum - 10 May 2009 15:52 GMT
> Evan Kirshenbaum filted:
>>
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> Wouldn't that require the functional associations to change when
> moving from the upper jaw to the lower, and vice versa?...

The only time I hear these terms is when they're identifying teeth.
Typically that's done by number, and so "buccal" and "lingual" are the
ones I hear most.

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Garrett Wollman - 10 May 2009 17:24 GMT
>The only time I hear these terms is when they're identifying teeth.
>Typically that's done by number, and so "buccal" and "lingual" are the
>ones I hear most.

If you ever get perio charting done (I get it once a year), the
dentist goes through your mouth with a sharp instrument, saying to the
assistant things like "3 on the distal buccal of 12, 4 on the mesial
buccal of 13".

-GAWollman

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R H Draney - 10 May 2009 18:53 GMT
Garrett Wollman filted:

>>The only time I hear these terms is when they're identifying teeth.
>>Typically that's done by number, and so "buccal" and "lingual" are the
[quoted text clipped - 4 lines]
>assistant things like "3 on the distal buccal of 12, 4 on the mesial
>buccal of 13".

Mine uses speech-recognition software, so all I hear now is numbers in sets of
three, interrupted by an occasional special note:  "two three three, three three
three, three three four, bleeding distal, three three three"....r

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Robert Bannister - 11 May 2009 01:54 GMT
> Garrett Wollman filted:
>>
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> three, interrupted by an occasional special note:  "two three three, three three
> three, three three four, bleeding distal, three three three"....r

I thought the numbers my dentist mutters were codes for the treatments
he was going to charge me for. My bill usually has a lot of numbers like
this to the left of the larger numbers with dollar signs.

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Evan Kirshenbaum - 10 May 2009 23:36 GMT
>>The only time I hear these terms is when they're identifying teeth.
>>Typically that's done by number, and so "buccal" and "lingual" are the
[quoted text clipped - 4 lines]
> assistant things like "3 on the distal buccal of 12, 4 on the mesial
> buccal of 13".

That's where I mostly hear it, but the way they do it at my dentist's
office is "Starting at distal buccal/lingual 2: 3, 3, 3; 3, 2, 3; ..."
They always start at the outside of the molar, so I hear "distal", but
"mesial".  I had actually been under the impression that the opposite
of "distal" was "proximal", but I'm not sure whether I actually heard
them say that or whether I just assumed it.

"Mesial buccal of 13" is not something I'd hear them say, anyway, as
4, 13, 20, and 29 were all removed to make room when I got braces.
(1, 16, 17, and 32 were removed later when they came in.)

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Garrett Wollman - 11 May 2009 03:44 GMT
>That's where I mostly hear it, but the way they do it at my dentist's
>office is "Starting at distal buccal/lingual 2: 3, 3, 3; 3, 2, 3;
>..."

Well, I suppose it depends on how bad your gums are.  Mine used to be
very bad, but they're OK now, so my dentist only notes the surfaces
that still have clinically-significant pockets.  (Unlike most general
dentists, she does not employ a hygienist, just herself, her
assistant, and a receptionist.  She does have an empty suite in her
office should she later change her mind.)

-GAWollman

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Jens Brix Christiansen - 11 May 2009 13:49 GMT
Evan Kirshenbaum skrev:

> (1, 16, 17, and 32 were removed later when they came in.)

A Danish dentist would call them 8+, +8, -8 and 8-, respectively. It
probably makes little difference to trained practitioners, but it seems
kind of neat that the four cuspids all are known as 3.

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Peter Duncanson (BrE) - 09 May 2009 23:36 GMT
>BrE filted:
>>
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>I've heard them use "labial", but its opposite seems to be "buccal" (with
>"distal" and "mesial" marking an orthogonal direction)....r

I found "lingual" in this list:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Commonly_used_terms_of_relationship_and_comparison_
in_dentistry

aka http://tinyurl.com/hlby86

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Django Cat - 09 May 2009 06:24 GMT
> > > jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote:
> > > > Hi, DC. �A while ago you asked about books on the useful
[quoted text clipped - 21 lines]
>
> --Jeff

Nine out of ten cats, but 99% of all known germs!

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Amethyst Deceiver - 09 May 2009 11:58 GMT
>According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is
>the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases.

I think you mean "bee honey" rather than "honey bee". It is the honey
that is the panacea, rather than the bee.
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Garrett Wollman - 09 May 2009 16:55 GMT
>>According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is
>>the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases.
>
>I think you mean "bee honey" rather than "honey bee". It is the honey
>that is the panacea, rather than the bee.

I thought it was the pollen.  I can see I'm no longer up on my quack
remedies....

-GAWollman

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Arcadian Rises - 09 May 2009 20:09 GMT
> In article <1eoa0553hcdm5grrp2ai02d6l1ff8mn...@4ax.com>,
>
> >>According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is
> >>the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases.
>
> >I think you mean "bee honey" rather than "honey bee".

Thank you.

>> It is the honey
> >that is the panacea, rather than the bee.
>
> I thought it was the pollen. �I can see I'm no longer up on my quack
> remedies....

The polen is effective only with a special chant.
It's a well kept secret, so I'm not going to write it here.

> -GAWollman
>
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jerry_friedman@yahoo.com - 10 May 2009 04:19 GMT
> In article <1eoa0553hcdm5grrp2ai02d6l1ff8mn...@4ax.com>,
>
[quoted text clipped - 6 lines]
> I thought it was the pollen.  I can see I'm no longer up on my quack
> remedies....

Also the venom.  A friend tried getting stung by bees and found that
it actually reduced her pain, but made her so sick it wasn't worth
it.  Apparently the ther-apist had felt that the risk of that was so
slight as to be not worth mentioning.

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Marius.Hancu@gmail.com - 09 May 2009 02:22 GMT
Of some potential interest:

----------
Notes on English Composition

written by Glenn Paquette

Introduction

This is the first in a planned series of notes on English composition.
These notes are intended as a reference for the writing of academic
works to be used by ``non-native" physicists and mathematicians.

http://www2.yukawa.kyoto-u.ac.jp/~ptpwww/eng-note/e-note.html
----------

Marius Hancu
Steve Hayes - 09 May 2009 06:55 GMT
>> Hi, DC.  A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or
>> revolting cliches) of academic writing.  Do you know /They Say I Say/,
[quoted text clipped - 11 lines]
>Oh, those are great!  Along with 'most people would agree that...'.
>Thanks Jerry, I'll check it out.

How about "It is thought that... "

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Django Cat - 09 May 2009 07:25 GMT
> >> Hi, DC.  A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases
> (or >> revolting cliches) of academic writing.  Do you know /They Say
[quoted text clipped - 13 lines]
>
> How about "It is thought that... "

"Experts have stated..."

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R H Draney - 09 May 2009 08:13 GMT
Steve Hayes filted:

>>> * Americans today tend to believe that...
>>>
[quoted text clipped - 6 lines]
>
>How about "It is thought that... "

Good way to distance yourself from what is about to follow...I'm partial to
"some have suggested that..." myself....

If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes without
saying that..."

....r

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Django Cat - 09 May 2009 08:48 GMT
> Steve Hayes filted:
> >
[quoted text clipped - 17 lines]
> If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes
> without saying that..."

"... ; but I'm going to say it, anyway".

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Steve Hayes - 09 May 2009 17:50 GMT
>Steve Hayes filted:
>>
[quoted text clipped - 14 lines]
>If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes without
>saying that..."

And the next paragraph could begin "it would be redundant to add that".

And the following one "it would be entirely superfluous to remind you that".

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Garrett Wollman - 09 May 2009 19:38 GMT
>>If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes without
>>saying that..."
>
>And the next paragraph could begin "it would be redundant to add that".
>
>And the following one "it would be entirely superfluous to remind you that".

In rec.arts.sf.written it's "As you know, Bob, ...", in imitation of a
particularly cliched style of infodump.  (So far as I know, none of
the regulars are named "Bob".)

-GAWollman

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Nick - 09 May 2009 19:41 GMT
>>>If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes without
>>>saying that..."
[quoted text clipped - 6 lines]
> particularly cliched style of infodump.  (So far as I know, none of
> the regulars are named "Bob".)

I've been known to use the good old Civil Service "As you'll be aware" -
which generally prefaces a lesson on egg sucking aimed at ones
superiors, who have often forgotten just how to do it.
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Evan Kirshenbaum - 09 May 2009 23:25 GMT
>>>>If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it
>>>>goes without saying that..."
[quoted text clipped - 12 lines]
> aware" - which generally prefaces a lesson on egg sucking aimed at
> ones superiors, who have often forgotten just how to do it.

The difference is that an "as you know, Bob" is, unless I'm mistaken,
aimed at the reader (or viewer) and serves no purpose other than to
make the reader understand terminology and history that really would
be familiar to the people being addressed.  "As you know Bob, the
United States was once a colony of England."  "Cars are popular
four-wheeled vehicles that can carry up to four or five people."  "The
atomic bomb was dropped on Japan in World War II."

"It goes without saying that ..." means "I want you to understand that
I think that it's obvious that ... but I realize that there are people
who might disagree, and I think that you're an idiot if you are one."

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Arcadian Rises - 09 May 2009 20:05 GMT
> >Steve Hayes filted:
>
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>
> And the following one "it would be entirely superfluous to remind you that".

"Not to mention that [the unmentionable]."
 
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