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jerry_friedman@yahoo.com - 08 May 2009 18:54 GMT Hi, DC. A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or revolting cliches) of academic writing. Do you know /They Say I Say/, by Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenster? It seems to be an introduction to writing about controversial topics, and it includes some dozens of template sentences. For instance, in the Index of Templates under "Introducing Standard Views", the first entries are
* Americans today tend to believe that...
*Conventional wisdom has it that...
* Common sense seems to dictate that...
-- Jerry Friedman
Django Cat - 08 May 2009 20:53 GMT > Hi, DC. A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or > revolting cliches) of academic writing. Do you know /They Say I Say/, [quoted text clipped - 8 lines] > > * Common sense seems to dictate that... Oh, those are great! Along with 'most people would agree that...'. Thanks Jerry, I'll check it out.
DC --
Arcadian Rises - 08 May 2009 21:29 GMT > jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote: > > Hi, DC. �A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or [quoted text clipped - 15 lines] > DC > -- I prefer the more scientific kind:
Research says...
All dentists agree that...
Statistics show...
or even more accurate:
According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases.
William - 08 May 2009 21:37 GMT > > jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote: > > > Hi, DC. A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or [quoted text clipped - 28 lines] > According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is > the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases.- Hide quoted text - I rather like the advertorial
"I'm not a dentist, but studies show that...".
-- WH
stephanie.mitchell@telenet.be - 08 May 2009 22:33 GMT > > > jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote: > > > > Hi, DC. A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or [quoted text clipped - 32 lines] > > "I'm not a dentist, but studies show that...". That's 'but I play one on TV', shirley?
Jeffrey Turner - 09 May 2009 02:13 GMT >> jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote: >>> Hi, DC. �A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or [quoted text clipped - 17 lines] > > All dentists agree that... Not _all_ dentists, four out of five dentists.
--Jeff
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Evan Kirshenbaum - 09 May 2009 05:32 GMT >> All dentists agree that... > > Not _all_ dentists, four out of five dentists. Not even that. "Four out of five dentists surveyed".
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Peter Duncanson (BrE) - 09 May 2009 13:50 GMT >>> All dentists agree that... >> >> Not _all_ dentists, four out of five dentists. > >Not even that. "Four out of five dentists surveyed". Then this this one "Colgate Total Professional Weekly Clean...clinically tested by dentists".
Good, but what were the results of the clinical tests?
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franzi - 09 May 2009 20:45 GMT On May 9, 1:50 pm, "Peter Duncanson (BrE)" <m...@peterduncanson.net> wrote:
> On Fri, 08 May 2009 21:32:00 -0700, Evan Kirshenbaum > [quoted text clipped - 10 lines] > > Good, but what were the results of the clinical tests? Nine out of ten beds tested caused backache in dental nurses.
-- franzi
Skitt - 09 May 2009 20:49 GMT >>>>> All dentists agree that... >>>> [quoted text clipped - 8 lines] > > Nine out of ten beds tested caused backache in dental nurses. Have the dental nurses considered a change of position?
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Peter Duncanson (BrE) - 09 May 2009 21:08 GMT >>>>>> All dentists agree that... >>>>> [quoted text clipped - 10 lines] > >Have the dental nurses considered a change of position? Well, let's see. They should be familiar with terms like uppper and lower, labial and lingual.
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R H Draney - 09 May 2009 22:29 GMT BrE filted:
>>>>>>> All dentists agree that... >>>>>> [quoted text clipped - 10 lines] >> >>Have the dental nurses considered a change of position? ObPunchline: make up your mind so I'll know how to adjust the chair....
>Well, let's see. They should be familiar with terms like uppper and >lower, labial and lingual. I've heard them use "labial", but its opposite seems to be "buccal" (with "distal" and "mesial" marking an orthogonal direction)....r
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Evan Kirshenbaum - 09 May 2009 23:35 GMT > BrE filted: >> [quoted text clipped - 3 lines] > I've heard them use "labial", but its opposite seems to be "buccal" > (with "distal" and "mesial" marking an orthogonal direction)....r Mine contrasts "buccal" with "lingual". "Labial" should be the same as "buccal", referring to the lip rather than the cheek.
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R H Draney - 10 May 2009 05:24 GMT Evan Kirshenbaum filted:
>> BrE filted: >>> [quoted text clipped - 6 lines] >Mine contrasts "buccal" with "lingual". "Labial" should be the same >as "buccal", referring to the lip rather than the cheek. Sorry, yes, it was "lingual", not "labial"....
I've never gotten around to asking what the other two directions are called..."occlusal", I suppose, and "gingival" (or maybe "radical")....r
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Evan Kirshenbaum - 10 May 2009 07:00 GMT > Evan Kirshenbaum filted: >> [quoted text clipped - 15 lines] > called..."occlusal", I suppose, and "gingival" (or maybe > "radical")....r "superior" and "inferior", I believe.
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R H Draney - 10 May 2009 09:39 GMT Evan Kirshenbaum filted:
>> I've never gotten around to asking what the other two directions are >> called..."occlusal", I suppose, and "gingival" (or maybe >> "radical")....r > >"superior" and "inferior", I believe. Wouldn't that require the functional associations to change when moving from the upper jaw to the lower, and vice versa?...
(One hygienist made a point of reporting to the dentist something of interest that she had found on my "cusp of Carabelli")....r
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Evan Kirshenbaum - 10 May 2009 15:52 GMT > Evan Kirshenbaum filted: >> [quoted text clipped - 6 lines] > Wouldn't that require the functional associations to change when > moving from the upper jaw to the lower, and vice versa?... The only time I hear these terms is when they're identifying teeth. Typically that's done by number, and so "buccal" and "lingual" are the ones I hear most.
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Garrett Wollman - 10 May 2009 17:24 GMT >The only time I hear these terms is when they're identifying teeth. >Typically that's done by number, and so "buccal" and "lingual" are the >ones I hear most. If you ever get perio charting done (I get it once a year), the dentist goes through your mouth with a sharp instrument, saying to the assistant things like "3 on the distal buccal of 12, 4 on the mesial buccal of 13".
-GAWollman
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R H Draney - 10 May 2009 18:53 GMT Garrett Wollman filted:
>>The only time I hear these terms is when they're identifying teeth. >>Typically that's done by number, and so "buccal" and "lingual" are the [quoted text clipped - 4 lines] >assistant things like "3 on the distal buccal of 12, 4 on the mesial >buccal of 13". Mine uses speech-recognition software, so all I hear now is numbers in sets of three, interrupted by an occasional special note: "two three three, three three three, three three four, bleeding distal, three three three"....r
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Robert Bannister - 11 May 2009 01:54 GMT > Garrett Wollman filted: >> [quoted text clipped - 9 lines] > three, interrupted by an occasional special note: "two three three, three three > three, three three four, bleeding distal, three three three"....r I thought the numbers my dentist mutters were codes for the treatments he was going to charge me for. My bill usually has a lot of numbers like this to the left of the larger numbers with dollar signs.
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Evan Kirshenbaum - 10 May 2009 23:36 GMT >>The only time I hear these terms is when they're identifying teeth. >>Typically that's done by number, and so "buccal" and "lingual" are the [quoted text clipped - 4 lines] > assistant things like "3 on the distal buccal of 12, 4 on the mesial > buccal of 13". That's where I mostly hear it, but the way they do it at my dentist's office is "Starting at distal buccal/lingual 2: 3, 3, 3; 3, 2, 3; ..." They always start at the outside of the molar, so I hear "distal", but "mesial". I had actually been under the impression that the opposite of "distal" was "proximal", but I'm not sure whether I actually heard them say that or whether I just assumed it.
"Mesial buccal of 13" is not something I'd hear them say, anyway, as 4, 13, 20, and 29 were all removed to make room when I got braces. (1, 16, 17, and 32 were removed later when they came in.)
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Garrett Wollman - 11 May 2009 03:44 GMT >That's where I mostly hear it, but the way they do it at my dentist's >office is "Starting at distal buccal/lingual 2: 3, 3, 3; 3, 2, 3; >..." Well, I suppose it depends on how bad your gums are. Mine used to be very bad, but they're OK now, so my dentist only notes the surfaces that still have clinically-significant pockets. (Unlike most general dentists, she does not employ a hygienist, just herself, her assistant, and a receptionist. She does have an empty suite in her office should she later change her mind.)
-GAWollman
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Jens Brix Christiansen - 11 May 2009 13:49 GMT Evan Kirshenbaum skrev:
> (1, 16, 17, and 32 were removed later when they came in.) A Danish dentist would call them 8+, +8, -8 and 8-, respectively. It probably makes little difference to trained practitioners, but it seems kind of neat that the four cuspids all are known as 3.
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Peter Duncanson (BrE) - 09 May 2009 23:36 GMT >BrE filted: >> [quoted text clipped - 20 lines] >I've heard them use "labial", but its opposite seems to be "buccal" (with >"distal" and "mesial" marking an orthogonal direction)....r I found "lingual" in this list: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Commonly_used_terms_of_relationship_and_comparison_ in_dentistry aka http://tinyurl.com/hlby86
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Django Cat - 09 May 2009 06:24 GMT > > > jerry_fried...@yahoo.com wrote: > > > > Hi, DC. �A while ago you asked about books on the useful [quoted text clipped - 21 lines] > > --Jeff Nine out of ten cats, but 99% of all known germs!
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Amethyst Deceiver - 09 May 2009 11:58 GMT >According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is >the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases. I think you mean "bee honey" rather than "honey bee". It is the honey that is the panacea, rather than the bee.
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Garrett Wollman - 09 May 2009 16:55 GMT >>According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is >>the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases. > >I think you mean "bee honey" rather than "honey bee". It is the honey >that is the panacea, rather than the bee. I thought it was the pollen. I can see I'm no longer up on my quack remedies....
-GAWollman
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Arcadian Rises - 09 May 2009 20:09 GMT > In article <1eoa0553hcdm5grrp2ai02d6l1ff8mn...@4ax.com>, > > >>According to a team of doctors from the Mayo Institute, honey bee is > >>the ultimate antibiotic and the panacea of all diseases. > > >I think you mean "bee honey" rather than "honey bee". Thank you.
>> It is the honey > >that is the panacea, rather than the bee. > > I thought it was the pollen. �I can see I'm no longer up on my quack > remedies.... The polen is effective only with a special chant. It's a well kept secret, so I'm not going to write it here.
> -GAWollman > [quoted text clipped - 3 lines] > Opinions not those � | grants to rare events of meanness such power to shape > of MIT or CSAIL. � � | our history. - S.J. Gould, Ten Thousand Acts of Kindness jerry_friedman@yahoo.com - 10 May 2009 04:19 GMT > In article <1eoa0553hcdm5grrp2ai02d6l1ff8mn...@4ax.com>, > [quoted text clipped - 6 lines] > I thought it was the pollen. I can see I'm no longer up on my quack > remedies.... Also the venom. A friend tried getting stung by bees and found that it actually reduced her pain, but made her so sick it wasn't worth it. Apparently the ther-apist had felt that the risk of that was so slight as to be not worth mentioning.
-- Jerry Friedman
Marius.Hancu@gmail.com - 09 May 2009 02:22 GMT Of some potential interest:
---------- Notes on English Composition
written by Glenn Paquette
Introduction
This is the first in a planned series of notes on English composition. These notes are intended as a reference for the writing of academic works to be used by ``non-native" physicists and mathematicians.
http://www2.yukawa.kyoto-u.ac.jp/~ptpwww/eng-note/e-note.html ----------
Marius Hancu
Steve Hayes - 09 May 2009 06:55 GMT >> Hi, DC. A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases (or >> revolting cliches) of academic writing. Do you know /They Say I Say/, [quoted text clipped - 11 lines] >Oh, those are great! Along with 'most people would agree that...'. >Thanks Jerry, I'll check it out. How about "It is thought that... "
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Django Cat - 09 May 2009 07:25 GMT > >> Hi, DC. A while ago you asked about books on the useful phrases > (or >> revolting cliches) of academic writing. Do you know /They Say [quoted text clipped - 13 lines] > > How about "It is thought that... " "Experts have stated..."
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R H Draney - 09 May 2009 08:13 GMT Steve Hayes filted:
>>> * Americans today tend to believe that... >>> [quoted text clipped - 6 lines] > >How about "It is thought that... " Good way to distance yourself from what is about to follow...I'm partial to "some have suggested that..." myself....
If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes without saying that..."
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Django Cat - 09 May 2009 08:48 GMT > Steve Hayes filted: > > [quoted text clipped - 17 lines] > If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes > without saying that..." "... ; but I'm going to say it, anyway".
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Steve Hayes - 09 May 2009 17:50 GMT >Steve Hayes filted: >> [quoted text clipped - 14 lines] >If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes without >saying that..." And the next paragraph could begin "it would be redundant to add that".
And the following one "it would be entirely superfluous to remind you that".
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Garrett Wollman - 09 May 2009 19:38 GMT >>If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes without >>saying that..." > >And the next paragraph could begin "it would be redundant to add that". > >And the following one "it would be entirely superfluous to remind you that". In rec.arts.sf.written it's "As you know, Bob, ...", in imitation of a particularly cliched style of infodump. (So far as I know, none of the regulars are named "Bob".)
-GAWollman
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Nick - 09 May 2009 19:41 GMT >>>If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it goes without >>>saying that..." [quoted text clipped - 6 lines] > particularly cliched style of infodump. (So far as I know, none of > the regulars are named "Bob".) I've been known to use the good old Civil Service "As you'll be aware" - which generally prefaces a lesson on egg sucking aimed at ones superiors, who have often forgotten just how to do it.
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Evan Kirshenbaum - 09 May 2009 23:25 GMT >>>>If it's your intention to be condescending, there's always "it >>>>goes without saying that..." [quoted text clipped - 12 lines] > aware" - which generally prefaces a lesson on egg sucking aimed at > ones superiors, who have often forgotten just how to do it. The difference is that an "as you know, Bob" is, unless I'm mistaken, aimed at the reader (or viewer) and serves no purpose other than to make the reader understand terminology and history that really would be familiar to the people being addressed. "As you know Bob, the United States was once a colony of England." "Cars are popular four-wheeled vehicles that can carry up to four or five people." "The atomic bomb was dropped on Japan in World War II."
"It goes without saying that ..." means "I want you to understand that I think that it's obvious that ... but I realize that there are people who might disagree, and I think that you're an idiot if you are one."
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Arcadian Rises - 09 May 2009 20:05 GMT > >Steve Hayes filted: > [quoted text clipped - 20 lines] > > And the following one "it would be entirely superfluous to remind you that". "Not to mention that [the unmentionable]."
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