In “The Fifties,” David Halberstam wrote, “He suspected that the
Republican candidate would be not Robert A. Taft, but Dwight
Eisenhower, whom he thought might make a good president.”
“Whom”?! How can we put any credence in the historical analysis of a
person who doesn’t even understand the plain, simple logic of English
grammar?
James Hogg - 17 May 2009 20:43 GMT
>In The Fifties, David Halberstam wrote, He suspected that the
>Republican candidate would be not Robert A. Taft, but Dwight
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>person who doesnt even understand the plain, simple logic of English
>grammar?
You can always judge his historical analysis separately from his
use of "whom". He could still be a good historian, even if his
breath smells, he wears odd socks, and he doesn't listen to
everything his wife says to him. Don't throw out the baby with
the dishwater, as they say.

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James
waupecong@yahoo.com - 17 May 2009 21:13 GMT
> On Sun, 17 May 2009 12:35:40 -0700 (PDT), waupec...@yahoo.com
> wrote:
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> James
But this is a matter both of writing and of English. You could write a
historical analysis of surpassing magnificence, but if you wrote it in
pidgin I doubt if you would win a Pulitzer prize.
James Hogg - 17 May 2009 21:22 GMT
>> On Sun, 17 May 2009 12:35:40 -0700 (PDT), waupec...@yahoo.com
>> wrote:
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>historical analysis of surpassing magnificence, but if you wrote it in
>pidgin I doubt if you would win a Pulitzer prize.
There are infinitely many stages between the extremes of writing
pidgin English and writing totally faultless English. I suspect
that Halberstam, depsite your criticism, comes closer to the
latter extreme than to the former.
Shouldn't it be Pulitzer Prize, by the way?

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James
James Hogg - 17 May 2009 21:25 GMT
>>> On Sun, 17 May 2009 12:35:40 -0700 (PDT), waupec...@yahoo.com
>>> wrote:
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>Shouldn't it be Pulitzer Prize, by the way?
Shouldn't it be "despite", by the way?

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James
Garrett Wollman - 17 May 2009 21:38 GMT
>In \223The Fifties,\224 David Halberstam wrote, \223He suspected that the
>Republican candidate would be not Robert A. Taft, but Dwight
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>person who doesn\222t even understand the plain, simple logic of English
>grammar?
How can we put any credence in the literary criticism of a person who
doesn't even understand the plain, simple logic of ASCII text?
To answer the question slightly more seriously: I rather doubt that
the historical analysis was done by Halberstam's copyeditor.
-GAWollman

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