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pooya a - 11 Jul 2009 15:10 GMT

Hi there,
i'm Pooya.A and i'm student of art and i work for at home by my
computer . i want to make movie and i need to money . i repair old
photos and i can make nice postal card with your photos.you can repair
old photos or make a clip with photos for a gift. i can make a digital
album for you with low price.please check my website : www.repairphoto.blogspot.com
i 'll repair your photos first and if you like that you can pay it....
let's try....

www.repairphoto.blogspot.com
damavand1980@gmail.com

Best Regards,
Pooya.A

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Steve Hayes - 13 Jul 2009 06:02 GMT

>Hi there,
>i'm Pooya.A and i'm student of art and i work for at home by my
[quoted text clipped - 4 lines]
>i 'll repair your photos first and if you like that you can pay it....
>let's try....

In English the first person singular pronoun is normally capitalised - "I" not
"i".

Also, it is normal to capitalise the first letter of the first word in each
sentence.

"Work for at" home is ungrammatical. It should be "work at home".

You should have spaces after full stops at the end of sentences, but not
before.

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