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"[It] is just as good, if not better, than Google's search engine."

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Tacia - 30 Jul 2009 04:38 GMT
Ladies and Gentlemen:

I was reading a piece of news regarding search engines.

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Microsoft Corp. has finally roped Yahoo Inc. into an Internet search
partnership, capping a convoluted pursuit that dragged on for years
and setting the stage for them to make a joint assault against the
dominance of Google Inc.

    [...]

Now the extended reach Microsoft is gaining will let it introduce its
recently upgraded search engine, called Bing, to more people. The
Redmond, Wash.-based software maker believes Bing is just as good, if
not better, than Google's search engine. Taking over search
responsibilities on Yahoo's popular site gives Microsoft a better
chance to convert Web surfers who had been using Google by force of
habit.

http://www.google.com/hostednews/ap/article/ALeqM5jfYhOMMWKBgelmWuTgZp2f-LQLGgD9
9O7QHO1

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http://tinyurl.com/mjb9qu
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"Bing is just as good, if not better, than Google's search engine."

In this quoted sentence, at the moment of reading, I was expecting to
see the second collocated "as." In addition, I find the position of
the second comma odd; it would be also odd if I moved the second comma
to the position after "than."

These are my proposed rewrites:
1) Bing is just as good, if not better than, as Google's search
engine.
2) Bing is just as good as, if not better than, Google's search
engine.

Am I right?

Or is such a change unnecessary?
I googled "as good if not better than," and scanned the snippets; the
second collocated "as" strangely went missing in a great number of
snippets.

Please shed some light.

Sincerely,
Tacia
Eric Walker - 30 Jul 2009 04:55 GMT
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> "Bing is just as good, if not better, than Google's search engine."
>
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>
> Or is such a change unnecessary?

The original is horrid: typically sloppy journalese.  Your #2 is a
satisfactory casting of the ideas.  (Your #1 is also defective, as when
expanded it says "Bing is just as good as Google's search engine, if not
better than as Google's search engine.")

Note that if there were still such things as editors the sentence might
have ended up something like "Bing is at least as good as Google's &c &c."

Sidebar: "Redmond, Wash.-based" is equally repellent.

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Cordially,
Eric Walker, Owlcroft House
http://owlcroft.com/english/

Cece - 30 Jul 2009 20:11 GMT
> Ladies and Gentlemen:
>
[quoted text clipped - 44 lines]
> Sincerely,
> Tacia

"As good if not better than" has been driving me nuts for years!  I've
seen it in several novels, by different authors from different
publishers.  And heard it too, mostly in TV dramas.
 
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