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>Both OK?
B is fine.
I'm uneasy with A.
I'd use "If he is not being treated with the respect..."

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Peter Duncanson, UK
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James Silverton - 31 Oct 2009 13:48 GMT
Peter wrote on Sat, 31 Oct 2009 12:14:31 +0000:
>> Hello:
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>> Both OK?
> B is fine.
> I'm uneasy with A.
> I'd use "If he is not being treated with the respect..."
I don't know why "if he is not given the respect..." wouldn't be just as
good but "treated with" seems to have been around for a long time.

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James Silverton
Potomac, Maryland
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Chuck Riggs - 31 Oct 2009 16:03 GMT
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>I'd use "If he is not being treated with the respect..."
B is OK, but I'd reword the sentence to eliminate the touchy-feely
stuff:
If not treated with respect, Jack gets very ill-tempered and grumbles
all the time.

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Chuck Riggs,
An American who lives near Dublin, Ireland and usually spells in BrE
Athel Cornish-Bowden - 31 Oct 2009 17:56 GMT
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> I'm uneasy with A.
I agree, but "being treated" would be more acceptable after "When"
rather than "If".
> I'd use "If he is not being treated with the respect..."
Yes, that is better than either A or B.

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Marius Hancu - 31 Oct 2009 22:02 GMT
On Oct 31, 8:14 am, "Peter Duncanson (BrE)" <m...@peterduncanson.net>
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> >If not ____ with the respect he feels due to him, Jack gets very ill-
> >tempered and grumbles all the time.
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> I'd use "If he is not being treated with the respect..."
Agree on both counts.
Thank you all.
Marius Hancu