Hello:
Would you say that
"Chap I saw today ..."
flows better than
"A chap I saw today ..."
esp when informality is sought?
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[Party talk, 1930s]
'Anyway, Franco will soon be skipping back to Morocco. Chap I saw
today just come from Barcelona....'
Evelyn Waugh, Brideshead Revisited, p. 823
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Thanks.
Marius Hancu
HVS - 02 Jan 2010 10:47 GMT
On 02 Jan 2010, Marius Hancu wrote
> Hello:
>
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> Evelyn Waugh, Brideshead Revisited, p. 823
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It's more a matter of it being conversational than flowing -- it's a
common technique in joke-telling, for example. ("Man goes to the
doctor, says 'Doc...'", etc.)

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Django Cat - 02 Jan 2010 14:22 GMT
> On 02 Jan 2010, Marius Hancu wrote
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> common technique in joke-telling, for example. ("Man goes to the
> doctor, says "Doc...
I think I'm turning into a dog"
And the doctor says
"Just lie down on the couch please"
And the man says
"I'm sorry, I'm not allowed on the furniture".
DC
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HVS - 02 Jan 2010 14:40 GMT
On 02 Jan 2010, Django Cat wrote
>> On 02 Jan 2010, Marius Hancu wrote
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> And the man says
> "I'm sorry, I'm not allowed on the furniture".
When I replied, I was thinking of "I have a strawberry growing out
of my ear"; "I can give you some cream for that".

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Jonathan Morton - 02 Jan 2010 15:37 GMT
>>> It's more a matter of it being conversational than flowing --
>>> it's a common technique in joke-telling, for example. ("Man
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> When I replied, I was thinking of "I have a strawberry growing out
> of my ear"; "I can give you some cream for that".
In my case, I thought I was some curtains. "Pull yourself together, man".
Regards
Jonathan
Nick - 02 Jan 2010 15:43 GMT
"Jonathan Morton" <jonathan.mortonbutignorethispart@btinternet.com>
writes:
>>>> It's more a matter of it being conversational than flowing --
>>>> it's a common technique in joke-telling, for example. ("Man
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> In my case, I thought I was some curtains. "Pull yourself together, man".
I phoned him up and told him I swallowed a teaspoon. He told me to not
to stir.

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Don Phillipson - 02 Jan 2010 13:09 GMT
> Would you say that
> "Chap I saw today ..."
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> Evelyn Waugh, Brideshead Revisited, p. 823
Yes, but this style also has a well-known literary precedent,
Mr. Jingle in The Pickwick Papers, who commonly speaks
this way, as if in telegraphese. He is a crook (a confidence
man, who elopes with an heiress.)

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