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Marius Hancu - 12 Jan 2010 18:54 GMT
Hello:

Is this
"commenced to waiving"
instead of
"commenced to waive"
Southern, including black, dialect?

Couldn't be standard under any circumstances, I guess?

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[Porter, one of Macon Death's tenants, is drunk again, now waiving a
gun]

"[He] Ain't out for nobody in particular. Just perched himself up in
the attic window and commenced to waiving a shotgun. Say he gotta kill
somebody before morning."

Toni Morrison, Song of Solomon, p. 24
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Thanks.
Marius Hancu
the Omrud - 12 Jan 2010 19:02 GMT
> Hello:
>
[quoted text clipped - 13 lines]
> the attic window and commenced to waiving a shotgun. Say he gotta kill
> somebody before morning."

"waiving"?  Seems a bit unlikely.  I suppose one could waive a shotgun,
but one would not appear terribly fierce.

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tony cooper - 12 Jan 2010 19:33 GMT
>Hello:
>
[quoted text clipped - 16 lines]
>Toni Morrison, Song of Solomon, p. 24
>---

Something's wrong here.  The word should be "waving".  I would expect
"commenced to wave a shotgun" or "commenced waving a shotgun".

The entire context of what you have written is a manner of
conversational speech that is African-American dialect.  (Though not
the dialect of all African-Americans)

Since you used "hi", where I thought "hie" would appropriate, could it
be that you are reading a sloppy transcription?

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Tony Cooper - Orlando, Florida

Marius Hancu - 12 Jan 2010 19:42 GMT
> >Is this
> >"commenced to waiving"
[quoted text clipped - 17 lines]
> Something's wrong here.  The word should be "waving".  I would expect
> "commenced to wave a shotgun" or "commenced waving a shotgun".

Well, it's none of the
"commenced to wave a shotgun" or "commenced waving a shotgun"
to which I agree.

> The entire context of what you have written is a manner of
> conversational speech that is African-American dialect.  (Though not
> the dialect of all African-Americans)

Of course, African-American dialect.

> Since you used "hi", where I thought "hie" would appropriate, could it
> be that you are reading a sloppy transcription?

No, it's the same at Google Books:
http://tinyurl.com/ydxbl9f

Thank you all.
Marius Hancu
Donna Richoux - 12 Jan 2010 20:56 GMT
> Is this
> "commenced to waiving"
> instead of
> "commenced to waive"
> Southern, including black, dialect?

Yes. Two examples in Google books. August Wilson is biracial, his mother
being an African American from North Carolina.

August Wilson - Drama - 1986 - 101 pages
When he commenced to whupping on me ... quite naturally I run to get out
of the way. (Pause. ... I picked up them reins and commenced to whupping
on him. ...

My soul is rested: movement days in the Deep South remembered? - Page
261 Howell Raines - Political Science - 1983 - 488 pages
So we got sho'nuff interested in it then, after we commenced to havin'
the classes. ... And the Negroes, they commenced to lookin' at one
another

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tony cooper - 12 Jan 2010 23:14 GMT
>> Is this
>> "commenced to waiving"
[quoted text clipped - 15 lines]
>the classes. ... And the Negroes, they commenced to lookin' at one
>another

Do these examples indicate to you that "commenced to" is a feature of
black dialect?  It seems to me that, if you do, any common
construction found in writing by or about blacks then becomes black
dialect.  

I feel that black dialect is construction that is uniquely found in
black speech and seldom found in the speech of whites unless they are
trying "talk black".  For example, black people will say "I stay on
3rd Avenue" even if they've lived on 3rd Avenue their entire life.
White people will say "I live on 3rd Avenue".  

Another example, is "conversate".  I frequently hear black people
using "conversate" where white people use "conversation" or
"converse".  

Because these examples are uttered primarily by black people, they can
be considered black dialect.  A phrase, though, that is used by both
black and white people is not - in my book - dialect.



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Tony Cooper - Orlando, Florida

Donna Richoux - 12 Jan 2010 23:42 GMT
> >> Is this
> >> "commenced to waiving"
[quoted text clipped - 18 lines]
> Do these examples indicate to you that "commenced to" is a feature of
> black dialect?

Yes.

> It seems to me that, if you do, any common
> construction found in writing by or about blacks then becomes black
> dialect.  

The first is a play, written by a biracial person with direct heritage
of African-American dialect. Since you questioned it, I looked further
and found that the central character of the play is indeed black. I also
happened across more examples  of "commence/d/ing to XXXing" in Wilson's
work.

The second looks exactly like someone being quoted within the work, and
indeed the description of the book says it is a collection of
interviews. The snippet is not enough to give identification, but it is
full of more dialect markers.

> I feel that black dialect is construction that is uniquely found in
> black speech and seldom found in the speech of whites unless they are
[quoted text clipped - 9 lines]
> be considered black dialect.  A phrase, though, that is used by both
> black and white people is not - in my book - dialect.

I really can't see why this worried you, but I hope you are reassured.

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tony cooper - 13 Jan 2010 04:10 GMT
>> >> Is this
>> >> "commenced to waiving"
[quoted text clipped - 35 lines]
>interviews. The snippet is not enough to give identification, but it is
>full of more dialect markers.

It seems to me that to pronounce this as black dialect that you have
to determine that it is not also prevalent in writing by/about whites.
Just finding it in use in black writing doesn't do it.

>> Because these examples are uttered primarily by black people, they can
>> be considered black dialect.  A phrase, though, that is used by both
>> black and white people is not - in my book - dialect.
>
>I really can't see why this worried you, but I hope you are reassured.

It doesn't worry me.  I simply think that "commenced to" is not black
dialect.  To establish that it is, you'd have to use the same search
technique and not find it use by white writers or in the mouths of
white characters.

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Tony Cooper - Orlando, Florida

Donna Richoux - 13 Jan 2010 08:59 GMT
> It doesn't worry me.  I simply think that "commenced to" is not black
> dialect.

You mean "commenced to" followed by "-ing," right?

> To establish that it is, you'd have to use the same search
> technique and not find it use by white writers or in the mouths of
> white characters.

You're welcome to look for examples that it exists in other dialects as
well. I'm satisfied that it does exist in US black English, and it would
be interesting to hear that it is also said in by rural whites or in the
Scottish highlands or whatever.  

But you know perfectly well how near to impossible it is to prove a
negative proposition. We can show that something exists, to a strong
degree of general certainty, but we can almost never show that it
doesn't exist, not to that same degree of satisfaction.

I have my doubts because I did scan through the first 200 Google Book
returns of "commenced to" before I posted. The search can't look for
parts of words, so the only way to find those with "-ing" was manually
(if that's the word). The *only* results with the XX-ing form instead of
the infinitive were these two identifiably black ones. The rest were all
things like:

 commenced to run
 commenced to whirl
 commenced to receive

I have now checked the first 100 of "commence to" and "commencing to"
and found no "XX-ing". You need not tell me "That doesn't prove it
doesn't exist" because I know that -- but it does give me a good idea of
the odds.

I did spot this interesting snippet about the general form:

   Notes and queries - Page 70 William White - 1891
    Touching " commence to," it would greatly surprise me
     to hear that this modern  refinement on "begin to"
    has a warranty of more than forty years. ...
   
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Glenn Knickerbocker - 13 Jan 2010 23:50 GMT
> I have my doubts because I did scan through the first 200 Google Book
> returns of "commenced to" before I posted. The search can't look for
> parts of words, so the only way to find those with "-ing" was manually

Try "commenced to * ing" to find the few hyphenated examples (just one
valid one in a Google Books search, and one more in a web search), or
fill in any particular verb (from those examples, "laughing" and
"talking").  Looks like a mix of black and white to me, both Southern
and Western.

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Marius Hancu - 13 Jan 2010 02:03 GMT
> > Is this
> > "commenced to waiving"
[quoted text clipped - 15 lines]
> the classes. ... And the Negroes, they commenced to lookin' at one
> another

Thank you, Donna.
Marius Hancu
Jerry Friedman - 13 Jan 2010 04:39 GMT
> Hello:
>
[quoted text clipped - 3 lines]
> "commenced to waive"
> Southern, including black, dialect?

Try a search.  Here are some results from the first page for
"commenced to raining".  A number of people included pictures of
themselves or the person quoted--very helpful for racial
identification.

http://freepages.genealogy.rootsweb.ancestry.com/~relativz/

1885, woman born in New York State, probably white.

http://mog.com/music/New_Edition

recent, white man

http://www.rstonesifer.com/genealogy/archives/art_frank_j_penington_1863_diary.htm

1863 (or 1862?), white boy in Delaware

http://www.civilwargazette.faithsite.com/content.asp?CID=78124

1863, young man from New York State, almost certainly white.  The
first word of his letter is "Urs" for "Yours".  Kids those days...

http://books.google.com/books?id=hJv-tA5N4_sC&pg=PA88#v=onepage&q=&f=false

1864, white man from Virginia, same historical context

http://www.chuckrenfroe.net/airstream1/id12.html

2007, white man from Georgia, affects a countrified style some of the
time

http://booksbikesboomsticks.blogspot.com/2009/07/forces-aligning-against-me.html

2009, white woman from Indianapolis

http://wanderingnerd.com/?p=79#comments

2007, white man, probably from Indiana

I think we can conclude that it's used by whites as well as blacks,
with no obvious regional pattern.

> Couldn't be standard under any circumstances, I guess?

Not in my opinion.

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Jerry Friedman
Steve Hayes - 13 Jan 2010 05:26 GMT
>Hello:
>
[quoted text clipped - 16 lines]
>Toni Morrison, Song of Solomon, p. 24
>---

Typo for "waving".

To "waive" means to not apply a rule. There was once a book with the title
"Brittania waives the rules" (written by some Colonel Blimp who objected to
"the colonies" being given independence).

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