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Orange scent/Orange

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Marius Hancu - 14 Jan 2010 10:10 GMT
Hello:

Would you say that the orange in the paragraph below is also used?
That text was written by a native speaker of AmE.

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Uses for orange: Orange’s greatest claim to aromatherapy fame is its
ability to affect moods and to lower high blood pressure. In fact,
just sniffing it lowers blood pressure a couple points. It is also a
good adjunct treatment for irregular heartbeat. Research at
International Flavors and Fragrances, Inc., in New Jersey found that
orange also reduces anxiety. You don’t even need to buy the essential
oil; simply peel an orange and inhale its aroma.
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IMO, for a lay reader, mentioning "orange scent" or "the scent of
oranges/an orange" might help. For a professional reader, especially
in a text describing only aromas/scents, "orange" may be enough, but
sounds jargon to me.

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Thanks.
Marius Hancu
Marius Hancu - 14 Jan 2010 10:22 GMT
> Hello:
>
> Would you say that the orange in the paragraph below is also used?

Sorry:
Would you say that "orange" in the paragraph below is correctly used?

> That text was written by a native speaker of AmE.
>
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> Thanks.
> Marius Hancu
Cheryl - 14 Jan 2010 11:41 GMT
> Hello:
>
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> Thanks.
> Marius Hancu

I think 'scent' is left out, as you say, because this is part of a text
describing only scents, so it is seen as unnecessary.

I still think I'd put it in if I were writing the passage.

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Mark Brader - 14 Jan 2010 17:55 GMT
Marius Hancu asked about:

>> Uses for orange: Orange's greatest claim to aromatherapy fame is its
>> ability to affect moods and to lower high blood pressure. In fact,
>> just sniffing it lowers blood pressure ...

I agree with Marius and Cheryl.  The text sounds like jargon; it might
be acceptable in a context of scents, but is not the way people would
normally express it.  It's like the way a dentist tells you to "open"
when anyone else would say "open your mouth".

It occurs to me that this might be being done on purpose as a way of
predisposing you to accept "aromatherapy" as legitimately therapeutic
and the statements made as true.
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Default User - 14 Jan 2010 22:03 GMT
> Marius Hancu asked about:
>
[quoted text clipped - 6 lines]
> normally express it.  It's like the way a dentist tells you to "open"
> when anyone else would say "open your mouth".

To me it looks like part of list. I suspect there was a preamble not
mentioned here, something along the lines of, "The following are
various aromatherapy scents and their uses."

Chocolate
Basil
Orange
Etc.

Brian

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Marius Hancu - 15 Jan 2010 00:17 GMT
> >> Uses for orange: Orange's greatest claim to aromatherapy fame is its
> >> ability to affect moods and to lower high blood pressure. In fact,
[quoted text clipped - 8 lines]
> predisposing you to accept "aromatherapy" as legitimately therapeutic
> and the statements made as true.

Thank you all.
Marius Hancu
 
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