Hi all,
I am very confused about the usage of "SUCCESS and CHANCE" in the
following sentences. Could you please tell me if I should use a single
or plural noun?
" I hope to become a part of the ANZ Bank culture, and have CHANCE to
contribute my knowledge, skills, and efforts to SUCCESS of ANZ Bank"
(My point is that there is/are a lot of chance/chances and ANZ also
has a lot of success/successes)
Thank you very much.
tony cooper - 26 Feb 2010 05:13 GMT
>Hi all,
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>Thank you very much.
I reads like something written by a non-native-English speaker. The
word "the" would normally be placed before "SUCCESS", and the whole
think is boiler-plate cover letter stuff that impresses no one.
There's nothing incorrect about the usages, though. Inappropriate
choices, but not incorrect choices.

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Steve Hayes - 26 Feb 2010 11:09 GMT
>Hi all,
>
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>" I hope to become a part of the ANZ Bank culture, and have CHANCE to
>contribute my knowledge, skills, and efforts to SUCCESS of ANZ Bank"
It should read "a chance" and "the success".

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John Dean - 26 Feb 2010 11:38 GMT
>> Hi all,
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> It should read "a chance"
or "the chance"

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Oxford
Steve Hayes - 26 Feb 2010 17:00 GMT
>>> Hi all,
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>or "the chance"
Well, an article anyway.

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