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a - 16 Oct 2006 16:37 GMT

I must correct this answer please.

11) Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you
think people visit museum? Use specific reasons and examples to support your
answer.

In the museums there are a lot of things. In the museum there are our
history.

If we want to know present then we must know past. Museum are the right
choice to know our past. We can learning a lot of things and we can see a
lot of precious things.

For these reasons many people visit museums when they travel to new places.

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Leszek L. - 18 Oct 2006 21:30 GMT

>I must correct this answer please.

I have pointed out some of the mistakes, but I am not fully
correcting your text - no time for that, sorry.

> In the museums there are a lot of things. In the museum there are our
> history.

Please pay more attention to number. In the first sentence, you have
museum*S* (many of them). In the second, suddenly, there is only one.
And you correctly write "history" in the singular, but you wrongly put "are"
in the plural.

> If we want to know present then we must know past. Museum are the right

THE present and THE past.

> choice to know our past. We can learning a lot of things and we can see a
> lot of precious things.

We can LEARN (infinitive), not "we can learnING".

> For these reasons many people visit museums when they travel to new
> places.

This sentence is OK.

Good luck,
Leszek,

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a - 19 Oct 2006 01:32 GMT

>>I must correct this answer please.
>
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> Good luck,
> Leszek,

thanks for the correction. I understand.

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Discussion Groups / ESL Teaching / October 2006

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